when i was 21

[carolynwhines]

Comments

[chatnoire]

I really like the second one a lot. :)

[carolynwhines]

i like that one a lot too, i put it up to counteract the beat influence in the first one

[walkingbytch]

I actually liked them both.

That reads wrong, I would NEVER put up anything I had written in my early teens, too lovelorn ryhmey like, lol, but I did write a couple of short stories my senior year of high school and freshman year of college that my senior English teacher had published in one of those NY free zines then, PAPER or NY PAPER? I can't remember. Those I can look at at not squirm. Both of those are totally not squirmy, and the asphalt pulsing one really says NY summer to me.

[walkingbytch]

attack of the typo quen.

[carolynwhines]

thanks! and trust me, the stuff from my early teens is safely tucked away in the attic where no one else will ever see the poem i wrote about god. even the conservative right would be embarrassed by that one.