Tension

[carpe_libris]

As an addendum to the previous question, Gnome left this second scroll outside the lair:

Also, but it is tension-related, but how do you supply interesting action when most of the story is people talking?
Gnome

ORIONDear Gnome, I have ruminated on the question of your second scroll

Comments

[kara_gnome]

I promise, I'm a nasty-flavored gnome; completely un*nom*able, I assure you!

Wonderful suggestions, and make so much sense; thank you!