better late than never

Jul 03, 2016 08:12

pairing: jongin/sehun
genre: angst, romance
rating: g
word count: 665w
summary: second chances don't come by often; jongin refuses to squander his newfound opportunity.
notes: written for part two of sekaisquad's first challenge.

jongin had learned by now that both were important-words and actions. )

fanfic, member: sehun, rating: g, genre: angst, genre: romance, member: jongin, length: less than 1k, fandom: exo, pairing: jongin/sehun

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harujongin July 3 2016, 07:22:31 UTC
SPOT

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harujongin July 3 2016, 07:37:51 UTC
good thing you kept your promise!! bc josie would have killed you and i'd be mistrusting you too!!

but
“i’m tired of being in a relationship with your voicemail, jongin,” OK THIS IS SAD???? HOW MUCH OF A WORKAHOLIC MUST HE BE FOR SEHUN TO SPEAK TO HIS VOICEMAIL MORE OFTEN TO JONGIN HIMSELF??? realizing he's not been around enough and compensating it with kisses and cuddles and compliments later is pretty meh too bc... that's not all there is about a relationship. you need to invest more time than that ;u;

thE ENDING THO!!!! he did the right thing by muting his phone and putting sehun as first priority - tho it's probably not so good for his work - but he's saving his love life? ;u; bc words of love aren't enough when actions don't match but

“right here, sehunnie. wherever you are, that’s where i’ll be. we belong together.” if i were sehun i'd be so swooned! but i imagine sehun probably not completely trusting jongin yet and having sth like a test period? for dating? and then when jongin proves him he has changed and that he's a ( ... )

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carpesoo July 18 2016, 19:41:49 UTC
yes hai hai i always keep my word no need to worry about that.

i would like to think that in time, jongin makes sehun his number one priority and proves it to sehun and makes up for all the things he's done in the past.

yes, present tense omgggg its so difficult when you're writing about stuff in the past so you use past tense but then you gotta switch to the present tense because youre writing current happenings and its all so switchy switchy and just gahhhh i hate it haha

tysm for reading and commenting, em!! <33

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baeksthighs July 3 2016, 14:36:04 UTC
DIEM IM CRYING

i couldn't decide whether i wanted to kick jongin or be understanding of his situation bc work is important but sEHUN IS MORE IMPORTANT therefore i'm conflicted and sad /sighs although jongin realizing that what effort he was putting in wasn't good enough kinda put me at ease??? like idk bc when someone begins realizing that their best isn't good enough, it's usually the green flag for a turning point but still at the cost of their relationship, which is very :(((( jongin man why couldn't you have realized shit before sehun left then none of us would be brokenhearted /wipes tears

“please don’t leave,” jongin had begged one final time, choking on his tears. /chokes on my own tears

“i’m tired of being in a relationship with your voicemail, jongin,” /drowns in my tears ( ... )

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carpesoo July 18 2016, 19:43:58 UTC
OH NOES DO NOT CRY I WILL WIPE AWAY YOUR TEARS BUT I ONLY GOT A SNOTTY TISSUE SO IM SORRY BUT YOURE GOING TO HAVE TO MAKE DO.

yeah, its a tough sitch for jongin to be in..... but at least he realised it and tries to make amends so.... pats you. they'll be alright. ^^

hugs you. you are too kind to me istg but ily anyway <33

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trangsformer July 3 2016, 16:15:25 UTC
*me being my overanalyzing ass* soo..........................................what if Sehun retract his hand nd told Jongin its too late nd he cant deal wit Jongin's workaholic bum again?? what if the light hearted atmosphere is because Sehun moved on, because Sehun is usually a very attached and clingy individual and he felt as if longing for Jongin's affections every night made him feel pathetic nd he /actually/ deserves someone who put him first nd made him their priority!!
IM JOKING LMAO! no im glad they /somewhat/ made up or Jongin finds out how important Sehun's presence is in his life. but I, am very suspicious as to how much Jongin will repent his mistake nd proves that he's deserve to have Sehun's love again?
So, my point is that I appreciate the sorta open happy ending for this story because im a fan for realistic-ness nd tho I will be happy wit Sekai back together, not all situations will turn out like that.
I'm sorry if thats not ur intention for the story, I really enjoy it nonetheless, and thank you for sharing it!!

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carpesoo July 18 2016, 20:08:56 UTC
i mean, if you want to take it down angst lane, you're more than welcome to but why would you do that yourself? xdxd

but i purposely left it with an open, yet optimistic, ending for you to interpret it how you want. like, if you were in sehun's shoes, would you take jongin back? or would you think it's too late and he's missed his chance? that's the beauty of it, it's up to /you/ to decide ^^

ty for reading and commenting~~

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elena_ejja October 16 2016, 21:10:19 UTC
Ooh that angst and the happy ending is so satisfying it is my favorite , thank you

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carpesoo November 14 2016, 20:28:38 UTC
im glad that you enjoyed it! tysm for reading and commenting ^^

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