seemed like a good idea at the time.

[carrot_carrot]

The pigeon tasted of shoe leather, and when it was finished, all that remained was a smattering of feathers and the poignant resound that somewhere, for someone, something had gone terrifically wrong

Comments

[ow200]

Bollocking HELL, lj. I left a comment. Damn you for not letting me post it.

mother in law purses her lips Is this meant to be past tense?

Other than that, this is great. Particularly the first paragraph.

In fact... I'd happily have some quality alone time with that introductory paragraph... Y'know... To, uh, revel in its greatness! :P

[carrot_carrot]

Awww, you're so sweet! I'm glad you liked it! And yes, that was supposed to be past. Shame on me.

[ow200]

Haha, thank you. Do you plan on continuing it. Tsk, I'm unimpressed, Amanda :P

[carrot_carrot]

Yes I do plan on continuing it. There was a line I had in my head to use that hasn't come out yet, so it will be finished. Just as soon as Playwriting stops kicking my butt, ugh. D:

(also, hi you. where you been? :P)