dig your grave

[carrot_carrot]

Just finished Twilight and I think my biggest problem with the writing is that I am totally jealous I didn't think of it, because I feel like I could do so much with that plot. Egotistical? Yes definitely. So anyway, since I didn't, I thought I'd revisit my urban myth story, so here we go.

Comments

[ow200]

I like it :D

But I wouldn't repeat "foreign machinery" so often. Other than that, though, I don't see why it doesn't have a lot of potential.