Finding the Way Chapter Two

Aug 28, 2007 15:51



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“I’d understand if you wanted to wait a bit longer before bringing them back, but to just leave them in Australia with their modified memories is completely mental!” Ron snapped, not bothering to lower his voice.  He wished Ginny hadn’t left because he knew she would side with him on this.

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mrsquizzical August 28 2007, 21:32:34 UTC
oh, interesting. i like the acknowledgement of hedwig. and ron calling hermione on the parents-in-australia thing.

i'm looking forward to watching this one unfold.

btw she wasn’t at all intimated by Harry’s moodiness - is that supposed to be "intimidated"?

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carter_sg1 August 28 2007, 21:41:35 UTC
I know Hedwig is just an owl but I was completely caught off guard when she died right at the beginning of DH.

Yes, it's supposed to be intimidated. I've fixed it. Thanks for pointing that out and for your comments :)

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bridgetmalfoy August 28 2007, 22:07:19 UTC
wow, this is really good. it is amazingly well written. so many post DH stories I've read so far are unrealistic, but i feel as if this is what could of actually happened after the seventh book. well done, well done.

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carter_sg1 August 28 2007, 22:19:46 UTC
Thank you again for another really kind review. I'm glad you think its realistic so far and I hope to keep it that way.

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pokecharm August 28 2007, 23:33:41 UTC
nice work - can't wait to hear the rest - there is more, right?

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carter_sg1 August 28 2007, 23:38:14 UTC
Yes, there is more. I was going to make this longer but I've decided it's only going to be three chapters.

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einstein87 August 29 2007, 03:31:45 UTC
awww,,,too bad there'll be only 3 chapters..

but I'll take what I can get! hehe. can't wait for the final chapter! and still love your works ;)

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carter_sg1 August 29 2007, 11:20:07 UTC
Thank you again and I always love reading your comments :D

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kanedax August 29 2007, 02:52:08 UTC
Great stuff. Can't wait to read the next chapter. ;)

FYI, I just added you to my friend's list, I'm surprised that I didn't have you on there before.

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carter_sg1 August 29 2007, 11:27:20 UTC
Thanks again for reviewing! I'm not sure yet when the next one will be up yet.

I've added you as a friend as well ;)

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re: finding the way rutzy69 August 29 2007, 03:18:16 UTC
i'll be in london for the labor hols weekend and i'm delighted this H&G/R&Her fanfic got updated before i go. totally spot-on Harry and good take on Ron being the mature one than Hermione in that arguement for a change. all the best from NYC, have a delightful Labor hols!

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Re: finding the way carter_sg1 August 29 2007, 11:25:58 UTC
London?! You're so lucky! Have an amazing time! I hope to go there myself one day.

Ron definitely had to be the mature one in this chapter because he's lost a brother, which is why he's so angry that Hermione's just willing to leave her parents in Australia.

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