This is a great fanfiction. It is so nice and refreshing to see somebody who sticks to canon and stays in character. I am so sick of all the stories in which Carter & Abby have a fight, and then they magically make up and are suddenly in bed together, all within 500 words. You developed all of your ideas nicely, and I can see this actually happening, exactly as you wrote it, on the show. One of my favorite aspects was how you portrayed Abby - how much she wanted Carter back in her life, but was also afraid of getting hurt again. It was excellent.
There were a few minor grammatical & spelling errors, but nothing serious. The most glaring one is probably that Abby's last name is spelled "Lockhart," not "Lockheart." Otherwise, great job! I hope you'll continue to write and post.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Ya know, I've read so much ER fanfiction and never once has it occured to me that Abby's name is spelt that way! Lol, I blame it on being English! I have about 700 words of a new chapter written but I'm trying to decide what I want to happen - need a nice dose of angst! Thanks again for your comments!
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There were a few minor grammatical & spelling errors, but nothing serious. The most glaring one is probably that Abby's last name is spelled "Lockhart," not "Lockheart." Otherwise, great job! I hope you'll continue to write and post.
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Thanks again for your comments!
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