In Exile

[cartooned]

 
Title: In Exile
Rating: Gen
Words: 1,749
Disclaimer: I don’t even own the roof above my head. So I certainly don’t own anything in this ficlet.
Summery: Inspired by the prompt ‘“I suppose you'll want to know why I'm here... Well... Heh... I was exiled from the other universe... Bit of an incident, shall we say..." from Time and Chips unusual first

Comments

[catsfiction]

Aww, I love this. The male reaction to "Then we need to talk." The way Jack just wanders in. And TW3 pushing the Doctor into the Void. What I would give to see that on TV!!!

[cartooned]

Thanks for commenting.

I wasn't originally planing to have Jack already there, but he kind of demanded that he be present, and who I am to refuse him?

[aroniwen]

TW3 overpowering 10 and throwing him into the rift is possibly the most hilarious image I've heard in a while. What I wouldn't give to see that. Or read it....

[cartooned]

Is that a hint?

Glad you enjoyed the ficlet!

Thanks for commenting. (goes back to word document to have a go writing that scene)

[bubbles234]

Pahaa. That was brilliant!! :D :D
(And as for the TW3 overpowering him... imagine Ianto... all angry...and Ianto-y... mmmm... ahem.)

"Because I thought if I have to get a mortgage and carpets, you’re the only one I want to share that with.” " That line made me squee beyond all rationality :D

xxx

[cartooned]

(drools about Ianto momentally) Dammn now you got me started.

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[maniacalshen]

Haha, poor Jack, crying about his aging. XD And the image of TW3 forcibly tossing Ten into the Rift is pretty hilarious. It was mean of Rose to pretend she didn't know about Jack, and yet it was also incredibly deserved.

Because I thought if I have to get a mortgage and carpets, you’re the only one I want to share that with.

Aaawwww. Even if it doesn't make as much sense when the Doctor reveals he can get back through the Rift. ^^;

[cartooned]

(Looks at plot hole and quickly covers it with a blanket.)

Maybe he wasn't sure he could go back if he didn't know where Jack was? I could just imagine him trying to sneak back though the rift but getting caught by TW3 and thrown back though each time.

(Seeing plot hole now vaguely covered - nods)

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[jabberwockypie]

This made me very happy! People have pointed out a lot of good lines, but nobody has mentioned this one yet:

and Jacks an aging model with a love of WW2 coats.”

And yay! Rose is tiemlady! ^_^

[cartooned]

You picked my favorite!

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