Comments | carvone: seoul, 23:40, kai/lu han

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seoul, 23:40, kai/lu han

Oct 08, 2012 22:26

seoul, 23:40.
kai + lu han, g, 1,634w
Kim Jongin doesn't know this, but he shares the same train home with the new Chinese trainee.

( 'You go away for five years, and you come back a foreigner,' his mom keeps telling him, voice full of disdain and disappointment. )

and that's all

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kanji00 November 19 2013, 02:05:28 UTC

i really like how it's not just a crush or something that has luhan so interested by jongin, but the sort of idea/ideal that jongin represents; fame and debut, familiarity and real belonging. i love your jongin here, and i love how i can almost see that one train ride pass by in real time as all those thoughts/memories flitter in the back of luhan's mind. there's no interaction, but luhan builds connections with jongin anyway. also, the subway setting just creates a better sense of displacement and mindless routine and i just really like subway settings in general fdsaijo, so it works really well for me. anyhoo, thanks for writing! <3 :)