here it is

[casanovoz]

After a long time I have finally decided to write my book and here, for your eyes only, is the first paragraph, read it and tell me what you think, I could use the feedback

Comments

:-)

[iamcute169]

I love it, you nailed it perfectly how every person has felt at one point in their life :-)

CORNER!

[andyhaver]

I love it, that's a perfect way to begin your book. Good job, bro!

[jotunn]

Simply stated, bad ass. If there were more to read, I definately would read on. So starts the typin' and publish it up. And as always, I'll be more than happy to help you out w/ anything you need on it. Just ask. Lata.
~Leva