Comments | case_note: III: The Informant

lacunarity in case_note

III: The Informant

Nov 30, 2004 10:19

Comments 8

whee! anonymous November 30 2004, 20:25:55 UTC

This is great so far. I'll definitely be checking in Tuesdays and Saturdays to see if you've updated. I look forward to reading the rest of this.

sub_divided December 1 2004, 00:25:53 UTC

I remember when you would have believed, or at least consider the possibility

Should be "considered". Also, I'm smiling like Ryuk right now. Glee!

lacunarity December 1 2004, 00:48:35 UTC

Ah, good catch. I'll fix that one. (Or maybe Ryuk just has bad grammar?)

firedraygon97 December 1 2004, 00:33:33 UTC

I simply LOVE the description of Ryuuku's smile. XD

'It stretched across his face a little too far, like someone had taken a knife and extended it an inch on either side.'

<33 Beautiful imagery. ^^

neko_no_baka December 1 2004, 01:15:30 UTC

dude, this is good!!! I'm going to be keeping an eye on this ^.^

keraha December 1 2004, 04:17:37 UTC

:DDDD I love how you follow canon in just enough ways to make it familiar, but change it enough to make it so wonderfully different. Also-- Ryuk is excellent. I think he's the most convincing character so far; he has that creepy weirdness but it's not to the point where it's unnatural.