Happinesssub_dividedNovember 16 2004, 23:52:12 UTC
Ok, ok. You made this a community because it's (I hope I hope) going to be continued? That would be the best thing ever. This is cool, like old school cool. L is Sam Spade, famous but broke! Light is a well-meaning but ultimately deadly rich boy in distress! And Watari is a cat!!! I'm not feeling all that coherent today but I love the description of Light's eyes.
Re: HappinesslacunarityNovember 17 2004, 00:11:51 UTC
I haven't decided if I want to do this on a schedule or not, but I will be updating it periodically. Still need to work out some kinks in the story, so I don't want to get too far ahead of myself in posting and accidentally contradict myself.
Re: Happinesssub_dividedNovember 17 2004, 00:57:34 UTC
Any posts are good posts. Don't sweat it!
Wait a sec! Mogi and whatshisface are the neighbors L's been spying on! You know, to help pass the time between cases. He thinks they're up to something sinister, like maybe they're in the mob or something, but they run out to be completely harmless... er, ignore me.
Re: HappinesslacunarityNovember 17 2004, 04:17:54 UTC
Done! I have it all plotted out now! (Well, at least the main points.) I now know what the McGuffin is, and what Weddie and Aber will do (hehe, they're funny), and what happened with the BB Serial killer, and why things happen that happen, and the brilliant ending, and I've even thrown in a few good red herrings.
I should write all that out just in case I lose motivation and forget.
Still not sure about what Mogi and Aizawa will do, but I still have some wiggle room in the plot. I'll squeeze them in some place and make them do something awesome. Maybe I'll make them a pair of normal cops, to contrast with L's way of doing things.
I don't feel pressure to put out the posts, but I've found that I work better if I put myself on a schedule. Helps me keep focus and motivation. Let's say a post every Tuesday with an optional post every Saturday?
L is wearing a fedora! Light is invading L's personal space! Watari is a cat! *in the Happy Place* This is so excellent. Although would L really request peanuts? I see him as the "I'll work for cake" type of fellow, myself. XDDDDD
I hope you continue this (although, no pressure. Sorta. >.>). Will so be watching. :DDDDDDD
Well, this series is no darker or more mature than Death Note, and disclaimers hold absolutely no worth in any legal sense, so I didn't think they were necessary. But if it makes you happy... ;)
This is a pretty intriguing twist on the original Death Note storyline. Hi! I drifted by from one of the other DN comms and found this fic. I've got to say that I'm hooked now... Even in this short-ish chapter, you have a good writing style and just enough description that captures your audience's attention.
"Hm. Interesting eyes. Interesting request. Interesting guy." For some reason, I really love that line. ^___^
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heart heart heart. I'll be reading.
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Wait a sec! Mogi and whatshisface are the neighbors L's been spying on! You know, to help pass the time between cases. He thinks they're up to something sinister, like maybe they're in the mob or something, but they run out to be completely harmless... er, ignore me.
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I should write all that out just in case I lose motivation and forget.
Still not sure about what Mogi and Aizawa will do, but I still have some wiggle room in the plot. I'll squeeze them in some place and make them do something awesome. Maybe I'll make them a pair of normal cops, to contrast with L's way of doing things.
I don't feel pressure to put out the posts, but I've found that I work better if I put myself on a schedule. Helps me keep focus and motivation. Let's say a post every Tuesday with an optional post every Saturday?
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I hope you continue this (although, no pressure. Sorta. >.>). Will so be watching. :DDDDDDD
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I've got stuff planned out now. I've just got to, you know, write it.
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"Hm. Interesting eyes. Interesting request. Interesting guy." For some reason, I really love that line. ^___^
*Continues reading..*
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