...I see what you meant about the slash. It's not really there, but if you turn your head and squint... Probably it's because you keep mentioning how innocent and good-looking Light is, XD.
Ukita was a terrific person to kill off - he doesn't have a personality so we don't miss him. Start things off with a bang? Innocent!Light is growing on me - his concern for his father is really touching. And <3<3<3 L's sweet fetish. So far both of them are wonderfully in character.
I was thinking- since the story moves "backwards" (each new entry is above the previous entry in the community archives), how about including a link to the next post at the end of the cuurent post? Because even though you've got them numbered so it's clear what the order is, readers can be incredibly lazy and... yeah.
Yeah, that's why I did the numbering, but linking's not a bad idea. Readers are lazy but I'm lazy too.
I lj-cutted because I didn't want people to spoil themselves if they're just starting out. Can you imagine seeing the final entry at the top of the page before you've even started reading?
Love Saturdays too. There's going to be an update this weekend. A smaller one, but at least it ends the exposition and starts the real plot.
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Ukita was a terrific person to kill off - he doesn't have a personality so we don't miss him. Start things off with a bang? Innocent!Light is growing on me - his concern for his father is really touching. And <3<3<3 L's sweet fetish. So far both of them are wonderfully in character.
And oooh, Kira an urban legend. Interesting.
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An update! I love Tuesdays <3.
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I lj-cutted because I didn't want people to spoil themselves if they're just starting out. Can you imagine seeing the final entry at the top of the page before you've even started reading?
Love Saturdays too. There's going to be an update this weekend. A smaller one, but at least it ends the exposition and starts the real plot.
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