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casecard

I don't want no shelter, no calm --

Aug 10, 2011 04:38

( nothing to keep me from the storm, and you can't hold me down )

murder is bad for your health, tl;dr, so not kidding about the length, seriously tl;dr, silly exorcist choices are for civilians, mun will stop tweaking this one day, like dreams are supposed to make sense!, riding on the crazy train, revival, tl;dr as an extreme sport, *dressing room, may or may not be rewritten, +wordcount: over 2000

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solo_insanity August 11 2011, 04:22:21 UTC

I think this is your best one yet, and I really, really like your other stories. Especially that three part one.

... I really have nothing coherent to say because I'm rereading this as I type, but this is beautifully done. The way you weave and have adapted both characters for their development is stunning. And the colors are a nice touch.

case_card August 11 2011, 05:10:26 UTC

Thank you! :D I'm glad you like it! I was worried about how it would come across, since I've been writing and rewriting versions of it since the end of May / early June and I was starting to get frustrated with it... ^^;

I think it's funny that you commented when you did, because I was just on and tweaking a few lines minutes earlier. XD;

solo_insanity August 13 2011, 06:56:43 UTC

I will have to reread it then! I do enjoy it. I like how the older version is becoming sage like. It suits him. Well, sage like in the bit of the falling of the bandwagon type of way. But every good master needs to have their quirks, right?

casecard August 13 2011, 07:07:12 UTC

You don't have to; it's basically the same, aside from a word or two. (Changed "shine" to "sheen," for example.)

Heh, I wouldn't really think of him as sage-like, but the younger does know the least about anything. So, in comparison, maybe. XD V1 is dead and Smokey the Figure there, taking on some of his memories, likes to be just as helpful as the last version while trying to direct V2 one way or the other.

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