traces, part nine.

[casi_casi]

Title: Traces
Part: 9 of 10
Characters: David Beckham, Martín Cáceres, Fabio Cannavaro, Iker Casillas, Royston Drenthe, Julien Faubert, Fernando Gago, Raúl González, Pep Guardiola, Thierry Henry, Guti Hernández, Xavi Hernández, Gonzalo Higuaín, Andrés Iniesta, Bojan Krkić, Lionel Messi, Ruud van Nistelrooy, Gerard Piqué, Carles Puyol, Sergio Ramos

Comments

[txorakeriak]

Oh God, so many things I love about this installment. I guess I should make a list instead of doing my head in about finding 100 different ways to say "I also loved...":

• Thierry's defiant attitude when he's being interrogated.
  
  
• Thierry's nickname for Miguel. AHAHAHAHAHAHA.
  
  
• That entire first scene with Miguel. I've so long wanted to read him in a more deeper role, and seriously, CAN YOU READ MINDS? The thought of him having to clean up after this entire operation (i.e. killing Guti, who obviously knows too much, which means he hasn't spilled everything to Raúl yet, which should make for another intriguing denouement). I still don't think it was him who killed Becks, but it makes sense that he's the one who has to kill now.
  
  
• The scene with Raúl and Iker. Now I'm not sure if Iker actually DID forget his gun at Becks' place, or if Raúl just offered him an excuse on a silver plate. (Though what reason would he have for that?) If I weren't too busy reading and scrolling down, I'd be rubbing my hands gleefully all the time. :D And I love

LJ hates me, so this comment comes in two parts.

[txorakeriak]

I love this so much, and I'm both excited and anxious about the next part (and you know why). Seriously, I've read tons and tons of detective novels and am not really that stupid overall, but I have no clue who killed Becks and I doubt I will know it before you reveal it. At the same time, I'm absolutely positive you've given me enough clues to work with, so my cluelessness is a huge compliment to your talent at writing detective fiction. :D

(And the thing you said about having enjoyed writing this so much and feeling sad about it being over almost made me shout out: "WRITE ANOTHER!" but I stopped myself in time because, well, I am a greedy bastard but I don't want to annoy you or put you under any pressure because I can't even begin to imagine how much work it must have been to write this one. I'm so in awe that you did this, and so incredibly amazingly perfectly too.)

<3 ETERNALLY.

[casi_casi]

Hee, bullet points! I love you

[txorakeriak]

LOL, I am incapable of functioning without bullet points when reading such wonderful fiction, honestly. And even with the bullet points, I'm not entirely sure I managed a lot of coherency and sense. But if you enjoyed reading my comment, then all is well! :D Thank you for writing such an amazing fic, I've enjoyed every single minute I've spent reading this so far, and also the tons of minutes I spent thinking about it and marvelling at its awesomeness

[elisa88]

Can I just say, wow? Seriously, you have such an amazing imagination!
As usual, i'm confused. I still believe Iker has nothing to do with it, and I really think it's Henry, but there's so much going on!!

Can Not wait for the final chapter.. And are Guti and Raul gonna get together? :D
Loved it!

[casi_casi]

Thank you so much! You're very kind. I really hope you enjoy the last chapter. :)

I really think it's Henry
He has an alibi!

[elisa88]

what if he was in two places at the same time?? XD hahaha, crap. there goes my theory.
hmm.... but why was the gun at his place?!?! he must know who did it then.

[bentlerkay]

Holy Mother Fucking Christ.

I can't even process what I just read.

[casi_casi]

I'm sorry, this is such a late reply. But thank you so much for reading this. I hope that non-processing is a good thing. :)