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casi_casi

counterpoint; chapter two.

Apr 30, 2011 13:21

Title: Counterpoint
Chapter: 2 of 4
Characters: David Silva / David Villa; Sergio Ramos / Fernando Torres; Steven Gerrard / Xabi Alonso
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Lies.
Notes: AU. A story told out of time in twelve parts; here are the next three. Many, many thanks to all who read and commented on the first chapter.
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david silva, counterpoint, sernando, stevie/xabi, xabi alonso, steven gerrard, fic, davidavid, sergio ramos, fernando torres, david villa

Comments 17

sukha4 April 30 2011, 21:31:55 UTC

I love this so much! You write so beautifully. I love all these complex and detailed characters you created.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

casi_casi May 1 2011, 10:04:28 UTC

Oh, thank you very much! I'm really glad that you're enjoying it. :)

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casi_casi May 3 2011, 07:52:16 UTC

No worries; two comments are better than one! ;) Thank you so much.

elisa88 May 20 2011, 04:18:11 UTC

Nando has a lovely OCD, just not when it gets in the middle of him and Sese.

Silva and Villa... are still confusing to me. Villa knows that doing nothing isn't the greatest thing and he's definitely not proud of it, but it is like he doesn't want to do something about it.

And Xabi and Stevie.. Wow. They have every single thing synchronized, it can be both sweet and creepy. And I don't like how Xabs only wants the nice bits of a relationship, never having to confront someone about stuff.. Poor Stevie =/

elisa88 May 20 2011, 08:27:17 UTC

I'd agree with pretty much all of it! What you said about the synchronicity between Xabi and Stevie is especially interesting. Thanks for the feedback. C:

casi_casi May 20 2011, 08:30:44 UTC

Oh, sorry, that comment was from me!

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casi_casi October 31 2011, 04:44:42 UTC

Ah, this is such a late reply but thank you so much! I hope you enjoy it if you do end up reading more. ♥