counterpoint; chapter three.

[casi_casi]

Title: Counterpoint
Chapter: 3 of 4
Characters: David Silva / David Villa; Sergio Ramos / Fernando Torres; Steven Gerrard / Xabi Alonso
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Lies.
Notes: AU. A story told out of time in twelve parts; here are the next three. Apologies for the wait.
Feedback > life. Constructive criticism is always welcome.

| Chapter 1 |

Comments

[theosakansun]

Hmmm, I must have missed chapter two *goes to read that before I start reading this chapter*

I’m glad Silva’s finally getting away from that mess of a life he’s been leading. I don’t know why, but Silva kinda reminds me of myself, in a way at least.

Xabi and Stevie though :| Their story is so dark. I still like it but this far, their story is by far the darkest of the three of them.

I like Fernando. Like a lot. He seems so odd, and therefore totally like a person I’d like IRL. Also NO. Fernando get your ass home! I need you to stop Sergio :|

I like both your story and your characters. It all seems so real.

[casi_casi]

I’m glad Silva’s finally getting away from that mess of a life he’s been leading.
Yes, but he's unemployed now... ;)

I find your feedback so intriguing - the fact that you find the Xabi/Stevie storyline the darkest; the fact that Silva reminds you of yourself. If you feel like expanding, please do. And the fact that you actually like Fernando, whereas nobody else seems to!

Thanks very much for the lovely comment; I really appreciate it. ♥

[theosakansun]

I'll try to explain but I'm not sure whether this will actually make sense or not xD

Xabi/Stevie is dark simply because it's so angsty. and it's definitely the least happy out of the three stories.
David Silva reminds me of myself - He does the same thing every day and it seems like his life will always stay the same. That's why I think it's good that he decided to make those changes even though he's now unemployed. He had guts to take that step - I don't.
Fernando seems so...Idk. Boring but I guess he's not once you get to know him? I like that. I bet he can be fun too :)

[acchikocchi]

I've been meaning to comment before now, argh, but I just wanted to say I'm really enjoying this story, and how you're weaving the different storylines together. The Silva/Villa thread is my favorite (I might be biased), but I'm equally interested in seeing how where the other two strands will go, too. :) Thanks for sharing this!

[casi_casi]

Thanks very much, for reading and for this lovely comment! I'm really glad to hear that you're enjoying it. :)

[acchikocchi]

sfjkal;fjdf your icon. omg. I have never seen that picture before. words cannot express my delight.

moriiiiiiiiiiii

[casi_casi]

Ahhh, yes, I adore him beyond measure. I grew up thinking that Raúl and Mori were the ultimate football heroes. I think a lot of Liverpool fans love him despite his relative lack of success on Merseyside. He gave so much, had so much spirit.

[sukha4]

This is so good but oh so depressing.

My heart breaks for all of them, but most of all Sergio. I love Sergio's character and it's so sad that he thinks he's not needed by Fernando. I have to say I like Nando less in this chapter. Why on earth is he like that? >< I hope he gets home in time and stops Sergio!

[casi_casi]

Ahh, I'm sorry you find this depressing! But thanks for sticking by this story, and for commenting. ♥

[smallaffair]

god, your writing is just so. perfect. i love this but it's breaking my heart.

[casi_casi]

Thank you very, very much. And I'm sorry.

[ivy_charlotte]

i simply love your fic...

[casi_casi]

Oh, I'm so glad! Thank you for reading.