This is my newest one that i just got through writing today, its mine and my girlfriends 3 month anniversary and before i give it to her i was wondering if yall can offer some criticism
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ok, that was nice. I like it, but if you use it as an anniversary poem, I would leave the part about you leaving out of it. Unless you like it, because anniversaries are supposed to be happy days, don't bring up the sad things. But it sounded really good. Hope she likes it as much as I did.
hey is this chris that used to go to sv? this is olivia dove...i am not sure if you remember me. hope all is well...i really liked the poem...congrats to you and your g/f!! take care
yea its chris.....whats up OliviA lol remember how i used to say your name? if not oh well.....yea i remember you, ill never forget you tanya and becky from freshman english, chillin with yall three was one of the few good times i had in high school, sucks that i lost touch with all 3 of you. I ruined it with becky myself after i asked her out and i just never had classes with you. Me and tanya stayed close but she graduate early (a whole year early) and i havent seen her since. So hows life treatin ya? hope things are good, what college you goin to? anyway im gonna stop ramblin on good to get in touch with some of the ole IB crew though
hey again.....sorry it took so long...i have been having computer problems!! I am glad that you remember me!! I remeber english too!! LOL!! Sorry about becky....i didnt know tanya graduated early! hmm...Life is really good right now!! I go to ECU majoring in musuc education...and I LOVE IT!!! i got a good balance of school and social life going on!! its awesome!! what are you up too? its really good to talk to you again!! my screenname is svbrainiac04 if you ever wanna im me!! jsut give me a ding!! otherwise...ttyl boo!
hey hey lol i know this has been a long time but figured id try to hit you back anyway, i hope things are still going great at ecu im abuot to start wcu soon lol. Uncp fell through its hard doing things on my own. anyway im not gonna write to much just hit me back if ya get it.. see ya
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