Re: Not Your DamselcassiehayesMarch 31 2011, 23:03:06 UTC
BAMF ELENA FTW. Oh my god, seriously, though, this is awesome, you capture Elena so well, how she's so brave, always wanting to protect the people she loves, not wanting them to feel like they have to protect her, and the imagery of her and Stefan fighting their foes together, just, so much love.
Re: Not Your Damselscorpiod1April 1 2011, 10:01:55 UTC
Ommmggg, this is my Elena forever. You just have her down perfectly, because Elena gets shit done and does not back down. And this is how she would think, THIS IS HER THOUGHT PROCESS, she will fight for her loved ones, she will fight for what's hers, for her boyfriend. I love the line, "slay this Katherine-dragon," that's just perfect.
And I love so much of this, the description of Stefan's smile launching a thousand ships, that she goes after the dragon while her beloved goes at it from another angle (BECAUSE THEY ARE PARTNERS), "her offering," at the end and the very intimate imagery of Elena's hand in Stefan's hair as she gives him her hand. This whole thing is lovely <33333
Re: Not Your Damselhysteria_3cedApril 3 2011, 23:16:18 UTC
I love the repetition and imagery in this, especially the picture of Elena striking from the left with Stefan on the right. That really is them, the type of partnership they have.
She’s the girl whose home is found in green eyes and brown hair and a smile that is capable of launching a thousand ships on its own. Yes, yes, yes. This is just absolutely perfect; I love it so hard.
For someone who is writing S/E for the first time, you do it so wonderfully well. Thanks for sharing this!
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And I love so much of this, the description of Stefan's smile launching a thousand ships, that she goes after the dragon while her beloved goes at it from another angle (BECAUSE THEY ARE PARTNERS), "her offering," at the end and the very intimate imagery of Elena's hand in Stefan's hair as she gives him her hand. This whole thing is lovely <33333
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Thanks so much-I'm glad you enjoyed my first foray into Stelena fic.
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She’s the girl whose home is found in green eyes and brown hair and a smile that is capable of launching a thousand ships on its own.
Yes, yes, yes. This is just absolutely perfect; I love it so hard.
For someone who is writing S/E for the first time, you do it so wonderfully well. Thanks for sharing this!
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