[ fic ] stowaway hearts ; bonnie/caroline, the vampire diaries

[cassiehayes]

HOW DID THIS GET SO LONG? I HAVE NO IDEA. No seriously, this was going to be the shortest ever drabble and then it jst ran away from me and I've never even written Bonnie POV before in my entire life so asljdsljdldsjdls whew *deep breaths deep breaths* This was written for the prompt "I tried to do a handstand, but every time, I fell for you" by scorpiod1

Comments

[celeste9]

I really liked this. Completely believable and real-seeming, I felt so much for Bonnie. It really captured the awkward tension of Bonnie starting to have these feelings she doesn't want and the jealousy she had but couldn't express. Fabulous Bonnie voice and Caroline was spot-on as well.

[cassiehayes]

Oh gosh, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed, and it's so nice to hear that it felt realistic and true to character for you, that's super flattering :3 Thank you so much for the lovely comment, honestly, it means a lot! :)

[mfirefly10]

Oh, this was so gorgeous! And sad and bittersweet but also a really enjoyable read.

Your characterizations of all three girls are spot-on and I love how you explored their pre-series friendships here. And Bonnie...my poor, beautiful Bonnie gets her heart stomped on because she loves her best friend a little too much and can't say anything about it because of how much she values their friendship...SO sad and so very Bonnie.

*loves* this and them :)

[cassiehayes]

Awww, thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it, and especially that the characterization felt right, I think that can be one of the most nerve-wracking things about pre-series, lol, because everything was just so unbelievably different, but it's the same people! But you are too sweet, and I am sorry this was sad; thank you so much for the lovely comment <3

[gaimieyells]

Oh wow, this was so good! I loved it and now totally kinda completely ship them.Thank you for this!