[ fic ] let's freefall and see where we land ; harry/louis, one direction rpf

Mar 14, 2012 02:45


So, uh. This is RPF. This a thing I write now, apparently. As of posting this fic at least, which is a million kinds of terrifying, because I’ve had the weirdest hang-ups about writing RPF for a long time now, and I can’t quite believe I’m doing this. Oh, lord. Have some boyband RPF, why don’t you. Yep. But no, in all seriousness, if this isn’t ( Read more... )

⌦ rpf: louis tomlinson, ⏏ rpf: harry/louis, ⌦ rpf: harry styles, ∆ pg-13, ► one direction, [ fanfiction ]

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darelose March 14 2012, 21:05:26 UTC
I don't even know what to say. This is just so well written and it turned me into a bundle of emotions and just. UGH. I have so many feelings and I kind of feel like I'm about to cry but in a really, really, really good way and this is just so wonderful and I don't know how to tell you that. I just. MY HEART. MY EMOTIONS. I am already so embarrassed over this comment but I am also sort of incoherent so there is really nothing I can do to change it. Just, seriously, I loved this so much.

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cassiehayes March 16 2012, 20:22:24 UTC
Oh gosh oh gosh, I don't even know what to say about such a lovely comment tbh, THANK YOUU first off *squishes* Incoherency is a totally flattering reaction, hahaha, like just to hear that you felt emotional about what I wrote, so flattering, like, idek what I'm saying but this comment made me smile so much. You are too sweet, basically, and I am so glad that you enjoyed this and it came off right to you, and just, yeah, wow, thank you! <3

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elusee March 14 2012, 22:44:52 UTC
askldjask this is beautiful god i'm incoherent. i was teary-eyed by the end. loved parts IV and V especially - they were really beautiful and i felt delighted and nostalgic. really, really lovely.

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cassiehayes March 16 2012, 20:24:29 UTC
Thank you so much, oh gosh, I am so glad that you enjoyed this, and massively flattered by such a sweet, lovely comment :3

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cassiehayes March 18 2012, 17:53:22 UTC
Oh my god, wow, I just, I actually don't even know what to do with this comment, you are too sweet and I am ridiculously flattered and happy that you liked it, and wow wow wow. Thank you! I did want to focus on the theme of ~fame and pursuit of success so I'm really glad that came across. And I'm glad you liked how section 4 was written! I wasn't sure if it would feel right, but it was kind of my favourite too, so that's so lovely to hear, and ugh, just, you are too nice and I can't believe it.

Ahaaa, section 5 though, I am sorry for the nostalgia and rather depressing turn of events, if it helps, I was mourning the fictional break-up even though I was the one writing it, so... I am probably crazy myself here, rofl. But wow, I am glad the emotions came through properly, and just, thank you so so much for such a lovely comment!

I definitely do hope to continue now! :)

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naughticals March 15 2012, 11:53:20 UTC
Fucking gorgeous, tears everywhere etc. The last bit was so wonderful and urgh such an amazing story

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cassiehayes March 18 2012, 17:54:16 UTC
Ahhhhhh gosh, wow, thank you first off, and sorry about tears! So very glad to hear that you enjoyed though, thank you, you are too sweet :3

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perfectlystill March 27 2012, 14:48:41 UTC
!!!!!!!! I have recently given into the fact that I adore these two so much (my feelings on everyone else are still coming along tbh) and looking through fic I came across this and was so delighted to see that you had written them, because I've loved everything I've read by you, and this was fantastic. I love the way you write.It's so wonderful and parts of it are so simple, but they just ache and just give me so many feelings.

The first section was wonderful, and there was something about it and the voices that I cannot quite pin-point, but was perfect. Something sad and happy and the theme of more to come in all of these was great. The theme of standing on a precipice and new beginnings were so well done and weaved it all together.

He doesn’t know what it means; it has been a long time since he’s known what Harry means in anything he does. But he will take it, even if Harry will never be his, only in pieces. He will take this piece of Harry, this moment that is not the whole world but them, only.Louis licks the taste of ( ... )

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cassiehayes April 17 2012, 17:39:21 UTC
Oh my gosh, this is such a ridiculously late response, sorry, I'm afraid school has been keeping me mostly away from LJ lately, but I was so, so thrilled when I was read this and saw that you've gotten into these boys as well!! They really are so lovely, ugh. And thank you so much, very happy that you liked this! I feel like my heart is permanently aching because of these two, tbh, oh god ( ... )

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perfectlystill April 17 2012, 18:30:44 UTC
This was really lovely! There is a lot of fic to sort through with this fandom, some great, some okay, and some not so good, and this was just a gem.

And sure! I will add you right now.

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cassiehayes April 19 2012, 03:02:55 UTC
Aw, thank you! I definitely know what you mean, I feel like the spectrum of fic quality in this fandom is veeeeeeery wide, so that's so sweet to hear. Although for the most part I do think a lot of the fic posted at one-direction (or now one-d-fanwork) is generally higher standard than most of what you see around tumblr; there are definitely lots of talented writers posting here on LJ. I was quite surprised when I first found the comm, just how much really great fic is out there.

Lovely, added you too! :)

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