[ fic ] you got love, you ain't lonely ; hyde/jackie, that '70s show

Oct 19, 2012 00:12


for dori, because shipping soulmates. and because she cries with me over sitcoms that ended six years ago. ilu, babe. (there isn't as much eric/hyde focus in this as i thought there would be, but i am pretty sure at some point i will end up writing actual eric/hyde/jackie, so, there's that too.)

you got love, you ain't lonely » that '70s show. hyde/ ( Read more... )

⌦ 70s: jackie burkhart, ⌦ 70s: steven hyde, ► that '70s show, ⏏ 70s: hyde/jackie, ∆ pg-13, [ fanfiction ]

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portions_forfox October 19 2012, 06:50:41 UTC
OKAY OKAY OKAY WOW OKAY WOW OKAY

SO

SO, UM

THIS IS A THING
THAT HAPPENED
AND IT IS NEARLY MIDNIGHT MY TIME AND I HAVE SCHOOL IN THE MORNING HAHAHAHA
AND I CANNOT EVEN LIKE
I CAN'T THINK STRAIGHT

THIS FIC IS AMAZING
THIS IS SYNONYMOUS WITH EVERYTHING I COULD EVER HOPE FOR AND DESIRE IN LIFE
THIS FIC IS MY SOUL

Ummmmmmm yeah so I will be back later with quotes and coherence but for the time being, know that this is so poignant and beautiful and IC and just wonderful and I love it and you're amazing and I'll be back ugh

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cassiehayes October 19 2012, 14:00:59 UTC
♥__________♥

YOU ARE TOO MUUUUUUUUCH WHAT AM I EVEN SUPPOSED TO SAY

I AM SO HAPPY/RELIEVED/ETC THAT YOU LIKED THIS THOUGH, AHHHHHHH, WRITING CHARACTERS FOR THE FIRST TIME IS SO STRESSFUL AND LIKE, THESE KIDS

THANK YOU BB, SERIOUSLY \o/

you are amazing and I will also get back to your feeeeeeeeeelings comments today too bc there is still lots I want to say but right now I'm frantically finishing up an assignment before I go to class since I decided to write this last night instead oops

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portions_forfox October 21 2012, 01:45:18 UTC
SAY NOTHING, YOU ARE PERFECT

and now there is another (/two other, I can't contain myself) comment on this wondrous fic!

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eternal_moonie October 19 2012, 20:19:10 UTC
WOOHOO!

Absolutely LOVE it hon!

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cassiehayes October 19 2012, 23:47:40 UTC
thank you!! ♥ glad you enjoyed!

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portions_forfox October 20 2012, 22:19:15 UTC
Okay here it is, my bona fide comment on this crazy-good fic. Thus it begins.

Jackie’s there, and her legs slide around his waist when she kisses him on the couch and her mouth is warm and kind of sweet and his hands fit over her breasts in a way that makes her arch her back and. Well.

It sure as hell beats anything else there is to do. I LOVE THIS, I love this beginning, because it totally starts out like, yeah, well, whatever, I guess we could just make out, but there's still this implication (It goes something like this) that this is going somewhere else and that's just awesome.

For a split second, it feels like he’s having an out-of-body moment, because how the hell did he ever end up here, where discussing the finer specifics of cosmetics colouring with Jackie Burkhart is actually an option, but she’s staring at him all big doe eyes and dusty lashes, dark curls falling over her shoulders, and he’s got a hand slid just under her silky blouse, fingers splayed on smooth stomach, and-and it’s like, right, well, how was he ( ... )

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portions_forfox October 20 2012, 22:19:47 UTC
“I mean... look, if she’s what you want, man-” He sounds dead serious, that’s the thing. Two seconds ago he was all game-show host flamboyance determined to make fun of Hyde, but now he’s saying if she’s what you want like he could honestly mean it, like maybe it’s true, even though they’re talking about Jackie here, and it’s just ridiculous, but this-it’s out of nowhere, but he thinks of the Eric who said “hey, if you need a place to live,” the Eric who finally manned up for once in his goddamn life to yell at his dad when he thought Hyde was getting kicked out.

So, naturally, Hyde makes sure to roll his eyes again. Swallows. Eric’s hand is still on his shoulder, and it’s all bone, his thumb digging sharp against collarbone, but Hyde doesn’t shrug it off

“Yeah, yeah, Forman.” He elbows him again too, but it’s half-hearted. “Don’t get girly about it.”

Eric just grins. “Nah.” CRYING MYSELF TO SLEEP. Eric going from one second joking to serious with Hyde because he wants him to be happy. Because theirs is such a caring friendship ( ... )

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cassiehayes November 4 2012, 19:34:37 UTC
D O R I

i'm the worst i know i am so behind at everything lately but ♥♥♥ your comments are the absolute loveliest with all your quoting bits and this made me smile so much and eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

basically i'm just happy you LIKED this because it was so stressful and i was like, spiralling over these characters (i haven't finished season eight yet but i'm a little ways into it and HAHAHAHAHAHANO EVERYTHING IS AWFUL AND I WANNA CRY ABOUT IT)

I feel like that happens to Hyde all the time during his relationship with Jackie, like wow, omg, what the hell am I doing here

ALL OF THE TIME. i feel like it also happens with the rest of the gang too, like when random hyde/jackie events are going on, or donna and eric have to give them advice or opinions and stuff and they realize they're treating this like an actual serious relationship and but what even it's JACKIE AND HYDE HOW DID THIS EVEN HAPPEN AND WHEN DID WE START TAKING IT SERIOUSLY WHEN DID THEY START TAKING IT SERIOUSLY ( ... )

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portions_forfox October 24 2012, 00:36:34 UTC
wait also I re-read your author's note and I realized I did not just dream up you saying that at some point you're probably gonna write eric/jackie/hyde, like, that is an actual thing. And I want it so so badly, ugh.

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cassiehayes November 4 2012, 19:47:46 UTC
"the one where donna goes away to college and eric loves her more than anything else in the world but he's eighteen years old and horny all the time and it's been months and it's not cheating if it's just your best friend and his girlfriend helping you get off from time to time (and donna is totally okay with it???)"

i mean what I DON'T EVEN KNOW but yes i do want to write this somehow and i totally will i just need to like. free time and shit. and finish a few things first. but yes.

i may or may not also kinda want to write fic where after donna and kelso go to california jackie starts hooking up with eric instead of hyde bc the SNARK but also actual similar feelings about the people they love running away!!! which they would never admit!! IDEK I JUST WANT TO MAKE IT HAPPEN because even though hyde/jackie is otp forever somewhere along the way i started to ship eric/jackie way too legitimately oops.

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