Comments | cassiehayes: [ fic ] these bloody days have broken our hearts ; caroline/elena, tvd

cassiehayes

[ fic ] these bloody days have broken our hearts ; caroline/elena, tvd

Feb 10, 2013 17:46

wowowow so it's been ages since i've posted anything or been around here, so um, first hi! decided to try and finish some really old WIPs, so this happened. basically alternative ending to season 2, if elena had been turned into a vampire in the sacrifice. yeah, it's been that long since i started writing this. anyway, this is for ladyrostova because she ( Read more... )

⌦ tvd: elena gilbert, ⏏ tvd: caroline/elena, ∆ pg-13, ⌦ tvd: caroline forbes, ► vampire diaries, [ fanfiction ]

Comments 12

softly_me February 11 2013, 01:56:35 UTC

OMG. OKAY. I DON'T HAVE TIME TO READ THIS RIGHT NOW BUT I WILL BE BAAAAACK

THIS IS EVERYTHING I'VE EVER WANTED IN A FIC

cassiehayes February 11 2013, 02:04:11 UTC

<333333

swirlsofblue February 11 2013, 08:49:58 UTC

Oh, wow, this is incredible, I love the way you convey the melancholy tone throughout and the bittersweetness at winning at a cost, beautiful. And I love that it ended with Elena asking whether she'd get through it and Caroline telling her that she would.

And I'm glad you're back :).

cassiehayes July 19 2013, 19:25:21 UTC

aaaaagh i'm the worst and this is so embarassingly late but THANK YOU for the lovely comment! ♥ i'm so glad you liked this, i have so many feelings about these girls that will just never leave.

fluffyfrolicker February 12 2013, 07:03:12 UTC

oh, THIS IS BEAUTIFUL ♥

cassiehayes July 19 2013, 19:26:16 UTC

this is horribly horribly late but thank you truly, i'm so glad you liked it ♥

ever_neutral February 12 2013, 08:52:16 UTC

Oh, wow. This is magnificent. I have a secret craving for AU fic surrounding Elena's almost-turning in S2, and I've always thought Caroline would be the most perfect mentor for her there could ever be, so. This fic. Is a gift. I love that you end it with hope even after all the melancholy -- because Elena has Caroline and Caroline has Elena and WOW I HAVE MISSED THEIR FRIENDSHIP OKAY. Also, the mutual biting = praise.

I am so thankful that you and your words exist.

cassiehayes July 19 2013, 19:30:28 UTC

i suck at the internet so this is horribly embarassingly delayed, but thank you, oh man ♥ I REALLY MISS THEIR FRIENDSHIP TOO. all three girls really, but my secret soft spot for caroline/elena will never leave. wah. season 2 is just such a great place to spin off from? so many possibilities! i feel like anything i write for tvd again will probably be stuck back in time a little, i have no idea how to write about season 4. but. anyway. thanks muchly, really really glad you enjoyed :)

scorpiod1 February 12 2013, 11:09:01 UTC

THIS IS EVERYTHING I EVER WANTED. LIKE YOU DON'T EVEN KNOOOOOW, BUT I LOVE EVERYTHING SO MUCH omg why couldn't have this have happened, this is stunning and gorgeous.

Like, I just about died when you had Jeremy be the one to force Elena to transition (how do you know that's everything i ever wanted how), like from that point, I was pretty much hooked. I love your Caroline and how she's so concerned about Elena and she spends the entire fic just trying to take care of her (my giiiiirls) but also slightly selfish in wanting her to live (I love so much the "isn't that what you wanted" line, how she was so close to saying it but managed to hold her tongue)--she's scared for her friend and being firm and a carataker and refusing to leave /o\ and then there's this constant theme I see of the house Elena is in just EMPTY and full of sadness and awfulness (I think the bit that got to me the most was Elena in the kitchen with coffee and alcohol and how teenage it was, like before, and just, THERE ARE NOT KIDS ANYMORE, THAT HOUSE IS AN AWFUL ( ... )

cassiehayes July 19 2013, 19:39:31 UTC

MEEEEEEEEEEEEEP I'M TERRIBLE AND THIS IS TERRIBLY LATE BUT THIS COMMENT IS SUPER LOVELY AND THANK YOU ♥ ♥ ♥

JEREMY AND ELENA OH MAN. more than ever since this season (ugh) i want to write aaaaaaaaaaall the elena/jeremy fic bc GILBERT KIDS, but i have literally no idea what i would write, so instead i just hint at feelings by proxy. ugh jeremy gilbert D:

"slightly selfish in wanting her to live" agh yes i love you for saying that. i feel like it just really rings true to caroline, especially where elena is concerned, where there's an element of how it affects her, where she would be mad at elena for something like that, and where even elena herself would be selfish if she did die, like. i am probably much too tired to be making sense right now and i would probably want to think about this more, but w/e. just a lot of importance on selfishness in their friendship, what they mean to each other and just building off that little bit of resentment caroline fostered on her end. even just the fact that caroline's a "better" vampire, that ( ... )