[fic/art] Communiqué Ch 11

[cassiopeia13]

Authors: cassiopeia13 & dragonsquill
Fandom: Star Trek: AOS
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy, Sulu/Chekov, Scotty/Chapel
Rating: PG-R
Warnings: Intense Graphical Story, Humor, crack, MPreg
Disclaimer: Star Trek and all people, places and things in Star Trek are not ours and we're not making any money from any of this... sadly.
Summary: The trials and tribulations of the Enterprise

Comments

[mercaque]

"and they adorable Pavel"

I DIED!!! Was this on purpose? It's the greatest typo ever! In fact I just loved Sulu's sister in this, the two of them have such a believable and endearing and sensible back-and-forth. They truly feel like siblings. And Chekov's reaction was great - yes, I can totally believe that he would be secretly THRILLED and trying not to freak Sulu out about how much.

I love this saga! Poor Scotty!

[cassiopeia13]

HA. No that wasn't on purpose. But I think I might leave it. Hey! Normal people have typos right?! Might as well have a few in here too ^_~

Yeah, I admit I LOVE Akane. She amuses me greatly so I hope I can do lots more letters from her. I might stick one in on the next chapter.

Pavel is THRILLED To be a Papa! And he's being overly adorable and I'm sure giving the crew cavities. ^_~

I'm so glad you like it ^__^ This feedback made my day

[mercaque]

You should totally leave it XD I actually strongly thought you did do it on purpose, because it's a totally in-character typo (and maybe a bit of a Freudian slip).

YAY more Akane! I adore Sulu-and-his-sisters fic!

[smokiquartz]

OMG!!! This is made of much win!!
"With pod" cracks me up.
And Pavel being super excited is really cute.
Just, yes!!!
<3!!!!

[dragonsquill]

Thank you! We're having so much fun writing it and comments make our daaaaaay! *pom poms of joy!*

[adafrog]

CUTE!!!!

[cassiopeia13]

Thanks

[dragonsquill]

Thanks! I love watching her work on the graphics >:^} and we're having a blast writing it.

Icon <3! Darlin. *melts*

[wolf_naked]

First of all Hikaru and Pavel are just adorable. Akane and Mama Chekov just have the perfect reactions. But the very best part? Hands down? The scene in my head imaging Bones giving them the horny teenagers lecture (one time is all it takes!) and then having the mid-rant revelation that this is not a typical result.
Though thinking about it, his giving the horny teenagers lecture over this situation at all seems a little hypocritical, afer all he knocked up Jim too.
Oh, and Christine scaring Scotty is great. She's not the other parent is she?

[cassiopeia13]

I was going to let dragonsquill comment to this one since we try to go halves on the replying, but I had to say that I LOVE Your icon! I was navigating away from the page and saw it and... it's utterly brilliant.

<3

Thank you for the feedback! The Bones rant totally came from an IM conversation (which is how all this gets done). I should post that conversation, it's seriously hilarous. HAHAHA! I had to toss it into this story SOME how.

Of course Bones is 32 and Chekov actuallY IS a teenager. He's only 18 so far. *pats him on his adorable head*

[dragonsquill]

HMMM Maybe I should write that scene up properly? 0_~ Do you have the convo handy??

[wolf_naked]

I know as a member of the audience I would totally love to see it.
And thanks for the icon love cassiopeia.
True Pavel is only eighteen, we (okay, I) do tend to pet him for it and then forget.