the lip-lock jinx 4/4

Dec 17, 2010 04:10

Title: The Lip-Lock Jinx 4/4
Author: Cassis Luna
Rating: PG-13
Warning/s: spoilers up to DH, EWE, profanity
Word Count: 20,555

Disclaimer: Harry Potter does not belong to me, it belongs to J.K. Rowling. No money is being made out of this.

Summary: The Lip-Lock Jinx, a jinx that renders the victim mute that can only be undone in two ways: if the ( Read more... )

~ one-shot, !harry potter, - hpdm

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Thanks for "The Lip-Lock Jinx", Cassis Luna! anarano December 17 2010, 07:18:12 UTC
A lovely story with a neat plot idea. Harry's none-speaking was well done.

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Re: Thanks for "The Lip-Lock Jinx", Cassis Luna! cassisluna December 21 2010, 10:20:22 UTC
Thank you very much! :"> I was wondering if Harry's muteness was shown weirdly, but I'm glad you think it paid off :) ♥

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geneva2010 December 17 2010, 18:22:58 UTC
The lip-lock jinx was such a creative idea, and Ginny was a perfect caster! The build-up was so wonderful - the gradualness of it, and the innocence of Harry and Draco were lovely. I loved your story.

You didn't ask me, but I did find the changing points of view a little, tiny bit distracting. You have such wonderful ideas and your writing is humorous and touching. Fixing that little tiny thing would bring it to the next level. Just my humble opinion. Thanks for listening, and THANKS for writing.

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cassisluna December 21 2010, 10:23:31 UTC
Thank you so much, bb! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

And I'll definitely work on that ^^; There were some parts where in I messed up with the HTML, making the dividers between scenes disappear, so maybe that's what made it confusing? :D;; Either way, my betas always did keep on commenting about my confusing point of views, so I'll be more careful next time :)

Thank you so much for taking the time to point it out ♥ :)

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nenne December 17 2010, 23:49:20 UTC
Awww! Squee! I loved it. I absolutely loved it! *flails* This goes straight to memories.

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cassisluna December 21 2010, 10:23:53 UTC
Aww, thank you so much, bb! :"> ♥ I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

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nenne December 21 2010, 11:48:05 UTC
I have been rec-ing this left and right. Hopefully you'll have lots more readers from it. :)

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cassisluna December 21 2010, 12:19:13 UTC
alsdknlskdgnlkansd THANK YOU SO MUCH BB :"> ♥♥ You have no idea how flattered I am :) ♥ *LOOOVES* Thank you, thank you :)

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joidianne4eva December 18 2010, 00:05:35 UTC
I have one thing to say, this fic was made of epic. That is all =)

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cassisluna December 21 2010, 10:24:29 UTC
Thank you very much! :"> ♥♥

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awakejupiter December 18 2010, 02:08:41 UTC
I love this fic. It was very sweet and I love the gradual buildup instead of Harry rushing off to kiss Draco at the first moment.

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cassisluna December 21 2010, 10:25:27 UTC
Thank you very much! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥

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