Title: The Lip-Lock Jinx 4/4
Author: Cassis Luna
Rating: PG-13
Warning/s: spoilers up to DH, EWE, profanity
Word Count: 20,555
Disclaimer: Harry Potter does not belong to me, it belongs to J.K. Rowling. No money is being made out of this.
Summary: The Lip-Lock Jinx, a jinx that renders the victim mute that can only be undone in two ways: if the
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You didn't ask me, but I did find the changing points of view a little, tiny bit distracting. You have such wonderful ideas and your writing is humorous and touching. Fixing that little tiny thing would bring it to the next level. Just my humble opinion. Thanks for listening, and THANKS for writing.
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And I'll definitely work on that ^^; There were some parts where in I messed up with the HTML, making the dividers between scenes disappear, so maybe that's what made it confusing? :D;; Either way, my betas always did keep on commenting about my confusing point of views, so I'll be more careful next time :)
Thank you so much for taking the time to point it out ♥ :)
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