Flash Fic: Infinite Loop (G1) PG-13

Dec 03, 2015 23:35

Title: Infinite Loop
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Time travel, groundhog-style
Universe: G1
Summary: Vortex is caught in a time loop. It's much less fun than he expected.

A/N: Found a thing in my folders that I'd neglected to post. I'm pretty sure there was a prompt when I wrote this, but I didn't write it down.

Don't lick the crystal )

flash fiction, fanfic, combaticons, humor

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LOL anonymous December 5 2015, 03:55:10 UTC
This is great!
Don't normally like the Combaticons (haven't found a lot of fics surround thin, fleshing out personalities, ... maybe I'm just not looking in the right sites), but this one? Oh, am defiantly LOVING IT.
Not sure if the best part is Vortex instinctively knowing that he's stuck in a Time Loop, or watching/waiting for the rest of the Combaticon gestalt slowly get locked inside ... complete with memory recollection.

Did you need a prompt to go with this lovely fic, or just want one?
Cause I did see Stargate SG1 "Windows Of Opportunity" (don't remember which season or episode ... year 7 I think, maybe 8) and this does seem to parallel what Jack O'Niell and Teal'c experienced for an untold lenght of time.

(Blast-off being believed when he insists he's experiencing a Temporal Disturbance while Swindle and Vortex weren't just takes the cake). And now that I think about it, his one line in cycle 67 made me think of a line from Star Wars: A New Hope: "I felt a great disturbance in the force" (go Ol' Ben Kenobi

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Re: LOL casusfere December 8 2015, 20:13:11 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I only know a couple of authors who write Combaticons, but they've got to be my favorite gestalt. Silly and tragic and gruesome all at once. XD

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