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prehistoriccat December 30 2011, 22:32:00 UTC
Yay!!!! Great conclusion - Abby and Connor working together, loved how you still weaved canon events and references in and how Abby refused to let Connor go on his own.

And Matt!! Eep, poor injured sweetie... you should write Matt more often, I personally find him an intriguing and complex character.

Its great to have you back in Conbyland!!

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casy_dee December 31 2011, 04:05:14 UTC
Thanks very much! Hey, they are a team, right? They're always better when they work as one.

Matt is fun to write, not that *someone* I know might have a wee lil crush on him. :D I hurt him just for you...

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evenstar_estel December 31 2011, 06:12:16 UTC
Good lord that WAS action packed! Very very exciting stuff and it played out inside my head just like a true episode from the show! You really paid attention to canon and extrapolated the essential bits to twist and turn them into your own. Bravo!

Philip, enjoy your coma you insufferable git.

Excellent use of all the show's characters too.

You've left me craving more from them in their safe house. I know you've promised a missing reel. I'll be impatient as hell and waiting for it. I can't wait to hear the words spoken, the affirmation of their love.

I know Gabe's calling you, but do come back to Conby more :)

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casy_dee January 1 2012, 02:39:30 UTC
LOL, I *told* you it had gotten very action-y. Thanks very much! I felt as if I was writing an episode. Heehee, I thought you'd appreciate Philip's end in this one.

You know, if I wrote a missing reel, it would be from the safe house. I shall, but I need to get back to Gabe first. Hey, once I finish Act I, I'll need a read-through...

Thanks again :)

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tay_21 December 31 2011, 07:23:49 UTC
FINALLY! I finished reading. LOL! THis was fantastic. Fun and action packed. Meep for Matt there, but yay! It's all good. LOL!

LOVED Abby insiting on going with him. You write them so stinking perfectly.

You did a brilliant job with the other characters. I loved that everyone came together to do what needed to be done. It was fabulous. I'm sure Lester will be extra snarky as a result, but he luffs them, so it's cool.

So enjoyed your twists and turns on canon events, very ingenious that.

LOVED you putting Philip in a coma! He so totally deserves it. Pompous arse!

You NEED to write a missing reel for this. Must, must, must have one. It's BEGGING to be written. BEGGING! I tell you! LOL!

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casy_dee January 1 2012, 02:46:27 UTC
Thank you! So glad you liked it :) Did I still manage to surprise you? Abby is not about to let Connor go off on his own, and they *are* a team. I'm very glad you think I did justice to the rest of the team. That actually had me worried. :D And Philip deserves a coma at the very least, the pompous ass.

Thanks again!

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freddiejoey December 31 2011, 07:30:38 UTC
This took on a terrific life of its own - as so many of the most enjoyable fics do.

Great third instalment.

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casy_dee January 1 2012, 02:47:03 UTC
Thanks very much! I'm happy you enjoyed it :)

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squirt12345 December 31 2011, 12:43:01 UTC
Yay! This was a great end to an amazing story! And it was definitely and action packed chapter! I love how they sent Connor and Abby away and yet they can't just stay out of the loop can they? I love how you changed the events, Philip definitely deserves to be in a coma. Stupid man. I love the gift that Connor gave Abby, it shows their love to each other and how Connor is always thinking about making her happy. I absolutely loved this story, and I do hope you do a missing reel ;) Thanks again!

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casy_dee January 1 2012, 02:51:16 UTC
Yaaaayy! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! I was hoping I weaved enough romance in there to make you happy. Philip SOOO deserves a coma. He's now a mindless vegetable, so he'll not be interfering in the future. :D Thank you!

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