Fic: Left in the Cold (part 2)

Apr 22, 2012 20:35

Title: Left in the Cold
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fanfic, abby/connor, left in the cold

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sunspecops April 23 2012, 01:43:35 UTC

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww warm fluffy happy reunited if a little bruised conby! :D :D :D

so concered with your evil grin and then connor woke up alone... i was sure you weren't going to reunite them!

((huggles the battered couple))

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next! :D

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casy_dee April 23 2012, 22:49:22 UTC
Thanks much! It *is* a birthday fic for E, so I can only torture them so much before I have to put them back together again. Glad you liked it!

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evenstar_estel April 23 2012, 01:46:52 UTC
Excellent, excellent imagery of them in the aftermath of the crash - the injuries, the confusion, the fear. Abby trying to be pratical, Connor trying to do as Abby would, but overwhelmed with worry. Heartstopping relief at their reunion.

Poor Connor and his head injuries. :( He's gonna need a cuddle by the fire, actually the all do! Very gripping and exciting stuff, but I have a feeling it's only the tip of the ice.... volcano?

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casy_dee April 23 2012, 23:00:49 UTC
Thanks so much! I wanted to capture the moment. I can hardly think of much that is more terrifying, and when you add in worry about a loved one, even more so.

LOL, I couldn't resist a patented Connor head injury. :) Very glad you liked this!

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prehistoriccat April 23 2012, 08:29:05 UTC
EEEP!! If this wasn't you writing this, I'd have been very worried about the fact Connor woke up alone (and I loved the little paragraph about his head injuries.. soooo true! LOL)

Trust Abby to be so practical and together, at least on the outside - and I do think she would feel it if Connor was dead and I believe that kept her going; she just knew he was still alive somewhere and that eventually she'd find him.

Onwards... I suspect you still have more in store for them before it gets better

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casy_dee April 23 2012, 23:06:23 UTC
Heehee! Come on, now. I'm not going to damage them beyond repair. :) This time. Poor Connor and his head, though. *grins*

I think Abby would feel it if Connor were gone, and vice versa. Soul connection and all that.

Thank you much!

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luvconnor April 23 2012, 11:55:46 UTC
Oh my poor Connor and his head injuries! You had me worried for a bit that they weren't going to be reunited just yet.
Great imagery and tension,I could see and feel everything with them
More please! Although I'm quite sure you haven't finished torturing them just yet, have you?

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casy_dee April 23 2012, 23:10:01 UTC
I know! I'm surprised the poor man has two brain cells left to rub together.

Thanks very much :) I was trying to capture the terror or the moment, and it always makes me happy to hear I've managed to convey the proper feel.

And um... nope. :)

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freddiejoey April 24 2012, 01:00:30 UTC
I've been looking forwarsd to more of this story. Thanks!

Great chapter

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casy_dee April 24 2012, 23:29:49 UTC
Heehee! Glad to deliver. :) Thanks!

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