Excellent, excellent imagery of them in the aftermath of the crash - the injuries, the confusion, the fear. Abby trying to be pratical, Connor trying to do as Abby would, but overwhelmed with worry. Heartstopping relief at their reunion.
Poor Connor and his head injuries. :( He's gonna need a cuddle by the fire, actually the all do! Very gripping and exciting stuff, but I have a feeling it's only the tip of the ice.... volcano?
Thanks so much! I wanted to capture the moment. I can hardly think of much that is more terrifying, and when you add in worry about a loved one, even more so.
LOL, I couldn't resist a patented Connor head injury. :) Very glad you liked this!
EEEP!! If this wasn't you writing this, I'd have been very worried about the fact Connor woke up alone (and I loved the little paragraph about his head injuries.. soooo true! LOL)
Trust Abby to be so practical and together, at least on the outside - and I do think she would feel it if Connor was dead and I believe that kept her going; she just knew he was still alive somewhere and that eventually she'd find him.
Onwards... I suspect you still have more in store for them before it gets better
Oh my poor Connor and his head injuries! You had me worried for a bit that they weren't going to be reunited just yet. Great imagery and tension,I could see and feel everything with them More please! Although I'm quite sure you haven't finished torturing them just yet, have you?
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww warm fluffy happy reunited if a little bruised conby! :D :D :D
so concered with your evil grin and then connor woke up alone... i was sure you weren't going to reunite them!
((huggles the battered couple))
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next! :D
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Poor Connor and his head injuries. :( He's gonna need a cuddle by the fire, actually the all do! Very gripping and exciting stuff, but I have a feeling it's only the tip of the ice.... volcano?
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LOL, I couldn't resist a patented Connor head injury. :) Very glad you liked this!
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Trust Abby to be so practical and together, at least on the outside - and I do think she would feel it if Connor was dead and I believe that kept her going; she just knew he was still alive somewhere and that eventually she'd find him.
Onwards... I suspect you still have more in store for them before it gets better
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I think Abby would feel it if Connor were gone, and vice versa. Soul connection and all that.
Thank you much!
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Great imagery and tension,I could see and feel everything with them
More please! Although I'm quite sure you haven't finished torturing them just yet, have you?
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Thanks very much :) I was trying to capture the terror or the moment, and it always makes me happy to hear I've managed to convey the proper feel.
And um... nope. :)
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Great chapter
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