fic // tvxq // our little princess #12

[catachrestical]

Title: Our Little Princess
Author: catachrestical
Keywords: Bandfic; hints of JaeHo and YooSu; some original characters.
Rating: PG13 for few language mishaps.
Disclaimer: Do not own, did not happen.
Notes: There are orphaned children and there is TVXQ, who had to go through hell and back to acquire them.

First version beta'd by janeberryblue; current version re-beta'd by bel_chan

Comments

[deathbyaccident]

Wow. Just wow. You made me cry at 8:30 in the morning. ^^

This was really a good chapter, I really enjoyed it! I liked the way you described things from Kaneko's perspective when the boys and JooEun came to pick her up! The meeting between Changmin and Akira, ooh that was classic. ♥ It was really heartwarming and happy and sad and oh man. That's my most favorite scene of all.

Second would be. . .*drumroll* Yoochun's Do I make you happy? Ugh, what a brilliant line, and directed to Junsu at that. I think my heart fell at that scene ^^;; I've always thought of Yoosu as that carefree kind of love, so I really like the way you describe the progress of their relationship

[audient]

... :3; -snugs- That's the highest compliment, if I may say, to get a rise out of your readers. Especially you cause you write a good, moving story, too. XD

:3; I don't describe chapters from the kids' POVs usually because it's a little difficult, yes. They're 6 and 2 years old and sometimes you just don't know how developed their minds are and how to make it believable so people buy it xD But I'm glad you loved that scene :3 I loved it too!

... 8D Again, very glad you liked it. I had troubles deciding if that sounded good or not. I'm still not sure even now.

XDD That seems to be the crowd's favorite. Thank you for telling me that :3 I love knowing that I can make my readers smile and all that.

♥ Thanks for reading and reviewing, yes.

[bellasurus]

That poll....where is TICKY BOX? >_<
but nah, seriously, it's up to you. *rolls* Regular updates are fine, but really, no one will mind if you take longer than usual to update :P *speaks from experience* As long as it's all yummy fic, that's the most important!

I'll be waiting for chapter thirteen~waitingwaiting~~*rolls off*

[audient]

... XD I GOT BORED. Nah, I just really wanna know what people prefers about the technicalities.

And okay 8] it looks like what they want coincides with my decision anyway. I'M STILL WORKING ON THAT CHAPTER. Let me bug you in msn again for it, yes?

♥

[rainbowpebbles]

your fic made me feel loads better. i've just had a traumatising experience of finding a strand white hair on my head T_T i was just looking in the mirror and BAM. there it was. sitting right there. who gets white hair at 17???? T_T T_T T_T srsly.

ALRIGHT!!! yay for this chapter (: with JAEHO!!!!! AHAHAHA XD XD XD you have no idea how much you made my day <3333 with yun's head on jaejoong's heart. awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. ^^

i loved this line --> "I can feed myself." But Yunho-hyung obeyed anyway because he was cheap like that. hehehe.

akira and changmin are <3 in a non-pedophile way. ^^ the way the both of them missed each other so much was really sweet. heheh. now that yoosu and jaeho are settled, does that mean changmin will make a trip to (in junsu's terms) BA-ji-ni-ya?? ^o^

can't wait for chapter thirteen!!!! :D

[catachrestical]

... XD I am 20 and I have white hairs. Seriously. I think it's just school and stress :') IT'LL BE FINE DON'T WORRY.

I love Akira and ChangMin, too xD They're about one of my favorite things to write in this story. Aaaand, I haven't had a solid matter for the sequel yet, but I don't think changmin's gonna be going to Virginia 8) at least not on a permanent basis. WE'LL SEE.

♥ Thank you!

[tippingjug]

Poor Akira...so afraid of the sound of the fusuma...but the kids really are clever.

I loved every part of this chapter, especially the 'appa fighting with umma' part, but poor Minnie, he was more hungry then interested in the fight!

I am so touched, it must have a really big thing for the boys to finally get the kids back, I hope they will all recover together from here on out!!!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...the Yunjae, Yoosu love!!!! Junsu is really a person full of enigma, he should remain so and his umma is love! She would be such a pampering grandmama.

Loves Akira to death, and gods Kane's lisp nearly killed me, I spent so much time reading that part...and appa!Yunho <33333333333

[catachrestical]

:33 Very glad to see that you adored the kids. They're special, yes xD They'll always be special to me~ *BIASED*

I'm also glad that you loved this chapter :3 it is a big thing for the boys, which is why they're prepared to put their careers on the line XD

♥ Thanks for reading and reviewing, love.

[futago_u]

you've updated ^____________^ hehehe... i love this chapter, cause this is the chapter where Kane and Akira comes home... so sweet ^________^ and cute... take your time with the chapters but ensure it to be long ^______________^ hehehe... i like long chapters ^^

[catachrestical]

XD I will. Thanks for reading and reviewing ♥