Comments | catatonic1242: NaNoWriMo - The Story So Far, Parts 45-48

catatonic1242

NaNoWriMo - The Story So Far, Parts 45-48

Nov 13, 2005 14:47

I just want to make it clear that mgal asked "canbillyplzcalldomaslutsoonomg?" I'm only here to oblige her. *g*

( 45. Jackie's Strength, Elijah/most of the cast, NC-17 )

stories for boys, the story so far

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mgal November 14 2005, 05:14:19 UTC

Pssst, you're supposed to change the names to protect the innocent. I mean it's not like I've been waiting all weekend for you to post this set. omgitotallyhave.

"You're my little slut, Dom," Billy says, and Dom closes his eyes and nods vigorously.
*squeeguhthud* And if that wasn't enough then you go and give it the most perfectly tender ending. It's as if you know me. ♥

I like what you did with Juarez, since Billy isn't the one usually portrayed to be the cheater in that group of three.

He learned about love by watching Billy and Dom.
I loved this bit, too. I do think that Elijah studied Billy and Dom and their interactions quite a bit in NZ. I don't find it at all hard to believe that he loves admires them both but also sees the value of what the two of them have together. This is why I can let him play with them on occasion. :)

catatonic1242 November 14 2005, 15:26:46 UTC

change the names to protect the innocent.

And I would have done so, if you were at all innocent. *eyeball*

Billy isn't the one usually portrayed to be the cheater in that group of three.

You know, I can go either way on that. I have this impression that Elijah just wants to be *part* of something that Billy and Dom have, so he'll wedge his way in however he can manage.

wanderlost February 5 2006, 03:44:31 UTC

So the wonderful mgal has been sending me links to your wonderful stories, and she sent me this one after a brief mention of Elijah in one of our conversations.

Wow. I don't know what more to say. Jackie's Strength was hot and humorous; Jamaica Inn nearly killed me; Juarez killed me, but for a different reason omigod, Billy would NEVER cheat on Dom!NEVER!!!! *sobs*; and Leather- what can I say about Leather? It was perfect. Just perfect.

catatonic1242 February 5 2006, 06:32:20 UTC

Ah, I can't say enough about how much I love mgal. Any friend of hers is a friend of mine. Nice to meet you!

omigod, Billy would NEVER cheat on Dom!NEVER!!!! *sobs*

Heh. Don't worry, I put them back together when I was done.

Thank you for saying such nice things. :)