Comments | catatonic1242: NaNoWriMo - The Story So Far, Parts 93-96

catatonic1242

NaNoWriMo - The Story So Far, Parts 93-96

Nov 25, 2005 16:31

( 93. Tear in Your Hand, Viggo/Orlando, PG-13 )

stories for boys, the story so far

Comments 4

supersloane November 29 2005, 20:02:50 UTC

"There's not enough sky for all the stars," Orlando blurts.

God, that's beautiful

catatonic1242 November 29 2005, 20:28:55 UTC

Thanks so much.

poetic_self November 30 2005, 09:24:20 UTC

I totally adore the insight you have in Viggo. Or in Viggo's head. Which might be the same. Or not. The paragraph about 'later' and 'sometimes' is what I think it Viggo to an extent that it is actually 'perfect' and it made totally sense to let Astin think 'no' and Sir Ian 'absolutely'- so, Viggo's answers depend a lot on which person he gives that answer and so maybe Orlando shouldn't have worried so much :)

And I was impressed by the knickers. Billy/Dom & lace panties fetish must be one of the ones I didn't expect I would like but I did :) Well done, darling.

The last one robbed me of words. Simply as that.

catatonic1242 November 30 2005, 20:51:14 UTC

so, Viggo's answers depend a lot on which person he gives that answer and so maybe Orlando shouldn't have worried so much

OMG, exactly! You get it! Yay! ♥