Comments | cate53: Involved part 6

cate53

Involved part 6

Mar 22, 2007 23:32

Involved Part 6 ( Read more... )

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anonymous March 23 2007, 00:20:00 UTC

oh i can't wait for next chapter. hope its very very soon

snoozefest87 March 23 2007, 00:32:53 UTC

Nice chapter, I hope you post the next one soon :)

anonymous March 23 2007, 02:55:11 UTC

I like that there's not 'smut.' I like sex in the context of a loving, friendly relationship anyhow, and I'd rather read that kind of relationship developing, with or without sex.

cate53 March 24 2007, 00:11:48 UTC

I'm not opposed to well written smut, I just have tried and can't write is without it sounding like an example of how NOT to do it!!
Having said that, it is a relationship story, its just not going to be explicit.

anonymous March 24 2007, 19:29:13 UTC

I'm not opposed to well-written sex either, especially in the context of a relationship. And, I love the characters of Olivia and Alex. Thanks for not putting it in unless you're happy with it!

Nice allie_svu March 23 2007, 12:13:50 UTC

This story is unusual, because it happens in "real time" (if one ignores Alex's unexplained reappearance in 'Conviction') yet it puts them in a situation that's fraught with danger and creates natural tension.

Thanks for concentrating on the plot. Keep up the good work.

Allie

anonymous March 23 2007, 22:55:02 UTC

I'm liking it! Can't wait for the next part.