Dont worry Jensen is on his way. and yups thats why i decided to make jared the one geting abused, because in most of the stories i have read its always jensen, and i wanted to do something different. Thanks for commenting
P.s also I dont have a betta for this fic so if anyone wants to be my betta then please let me know. also if anyone feels like making a header for this fic then i would be forever greatful.
I like the premise, and I think this is a very promising start. However, I did notice several grammar and tense errors. I think if you worked on that aspect a bit more your fic would improve quite a bit. I hope you don't mind me saying this, and I hope to see the next chapter soon. :)
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and yups thats why i decided to make jared the one geting abused, because in most of the stories i have read its always jensen, and i wanted to do something different.
Thanks for commenting
P.s
also I dont have a betta for this fic so if anyone wants to be my betta then please let me know.
also if anyone feels like making a header for this fic then i would be forever greatful.
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Make this better please!!
Keep on the good Stuff
~TeTe
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I'd be willing to beta, if you'll have me.
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