The light at the end of the Never Ending Tunnel (1/?) NC-17

Oct 13, 2007 19:11


The Light at the end of the Never Ending Tunnel 1/?
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catherineackles October 13 2007, 11:15:19 UTC
Dont worry Jensen is on his way.
and yups thats why i decided to make jared the one geting abused, because in most of the stories i have read its always jensen, and i wanted to do something different.
Thanks for commenting

P.s
also I dont have a betta for this fic so if anyone wants to be my betta then please let me know.
also if anyone feels like making a header for this fic then i would be forever greatful.

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ariverrtp October 13 2007, 12:01:38 UTC
I like the premise, and I think this is a very promising start. However, I did notice several grammar and tense errors. I think if you worked on that aspect a bit more your fic would improve quite a bit. I hope you don't mind me saying this, and I hope to see the next chapter soon. :)

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maritx October 13 2007, 13:21:31 UTC
Jensen... WHERE ARE YOU!!
Make this better please!!

Keep on the good Stuff
~TeTe

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gem_wyatt October 13 2007, 13:24:53 UTC
Aww. Poor Jared. Loved it. Can`t wait for more. XD

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quarterwhore October 13 2007, 15:31:18 UTC
Poor Jared! There should be more limp!Jared fics. *nods*

I'd be willing to beta, if you'll have me.

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