LoveFest, The Forgiven Part 2

[cathyinaz]

AU: Ennis decides to try a sweet life with Jack, but they need to resolve some issues between them first

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The Forgiven Part 2

[bmshirts]

Ah! Jack takes his revenge! Nice chapter. I love when the two fellas get all the past hurt out of the way, and look forward to the sweet life together that Jack always dreamed of.
Thanks. Carole

Re: The Forgiven Part 2

[cathyinaz]

Thanks for your nice comments Carole.
I love it when the boys get all that past hurt out of the way, too. I plan on moving into the sweet life soon if I can.
Cathy

Thanks

[cathyinaz]

That was pretty ornery of both Jack and Ennis and I love the boys forgiving each other and moving on to a sweet life. Thanks for the great comment!
Cathy

[cathyinaz]

Thanks for the nice comments!

Cathy

[sweetje]

I loved this story. I think my favorite part of this chapter was when Jack left Ennis tied up and went outside. I couldn't help laughing at that one.
Thank you for this wonderful story. I really enjoyed it. : )
Debra

[cathyinaz]

Thanks Debra,
I am so glad that you enjoyed it. I'll see what else I can come up with for another story or continue this one to the sweet life.
Cathy

[120cassie]

Hi

Great continuation..

I liked Jack leaving him on the bed and the pillows on the chairs..

Also liked this:

**“I sure as hell hope that ya love me and will stay with me for good or this can’t happen at all. Do ya love me enough to do that fer me? I ain’t afraid to die but you’ve been afraid to live, boy. **

Hope to hear more from you..

Julie

Thanks

[cathyinaz]

Lovely comment Julie,
I am glad that you enjoyed my little story. Yes, Jack was ornery to leave Ennis tied to the bed, heheh. Loved that visual when I imagined it, too. I will try to write more since it has been so well received.
Thanks, Cathy