LoveFest, The Guardian

[cathyinaz]

Adult content, *** M/M sex, some voyeurism. Someone is watching the boys and they don’t know it. AU, J&E, oneshot.

I'm just learning how to use LJ so I'm gonna try to do a LJ cut, I hope it works! Fingers and eyes crossed.

Comments

[bbm_lover]

Hey Cathy,
What a great little story. Rich being their guardian and looking out for them. That was just so sweet. Love how you describe Jack and Ennis here, it is so them. This could so easily turn into a nice fic in your hands. Thanks for writing it.
Jess

[cathyinaz]

Jess,

I'm so glad that J&E seem like they are "so them", that's a great compliment!
Thanks for your nice comment and I'll see if I am up to a longer story, this is still just my third attempt at writing stuff. I'm not sure if I'm ready to take on writng a fic yet. I'm still shaking in my boots about writing at all.
Cathy

[bbm_lover]

Oh Kathy, you shouldn't feel that way. The way you write, I'm surprised its just your third attempt. You have nothing to worry about, as far as I'm concerned, you did great. You know why I said that, its because I enjoyed it so much, the description, the flow of the story, the thoughts of the guys all made it such an enjoyable read. Thanks once again.
Jess

[tmn1966]

I thought this was great! I thought it was clever to have Rich as their watcher. I always like it when Jack and Ennis are together forever. :)

I really like the part that Rich observed that Ennis's eyes sparkled and he looked content with his life.

Thanks for sharing this.

Teri

[cathyinaz]

I always love J&E together forever, too.

Thanks, Cathy

[annabuffy]

Nice twist at the end with it being Rich watching and deciding to visit them. Maybe we could have more of this story? It's like you gave us the tip of the iceberg.

[cathyinaz]

I'll try to write some more of this story, but I may not make it in time for the end of LoveFest so I'll post it on Brokebackslash instead if I miss wednesday's end of LoveFest.... OK? Cathy

[ramona4jake]

Aw, that was so sweet of Rich - and bringing him in your story was really good ! I wish these boys ad a Guardian Angel, I mean a Fairy Godfather !
Thank you, it was beautiful !

[cathyinaz]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. Cathy

[trekfan]

WOW what a surprise, it was RICH lookin out for the boys? I am surprised Ennis didn't recognize Rich.

What a sweet, loving story you wrote. I loved it!

[cathyinaz]

That's why Ennis was startled when he came out of the barn, before that Rich had been in the shadows and never had direct contact with him. He had been just another face in the crowds that Ennis avoids until that minute.

I am going to write at least another part or two of this from the boy's point of view I think. Glad you liked it. Cathy

[trekfan]

GREAT I am happy you are going to write more

LInda