trying to learn to use poetry

[catkin]

I only wrote the poem yesterday after a chance encounter with my old science/religion lecturer reminded me of writing poems at all. (he is quite keen on encouraging me) So I took my poem with me and he had a look at it and gave me some tips and talked about poetry in general

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[roiben]

Mouse writes

[roiben]

Sorry, I had a typo. It should read:

"Had it the stricken privilege"

[roiben]

wouldnt it be "rips and renders"?

[ash_wings]

hello hunny i not sure if you got mine last post.Mine email when down and I lost your email .can I get it again