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[catlover_28]

hey ya'll i have a poem i have to do for world history and i want you to see how it is.and please give me your opinion.here it is

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[kaykay006605]

this sounds like a streets song.....

[catlover_28]

my teacher said it would sound better if it rhymed soo i tried.Gay helped me a little.