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Out of Tune (G) - Spoilers to JE - Ten/Rose/Jack/Donna

Aug 01, 2008 12:52

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journey's end, out of tune

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honorh August 1 2008, 17:02:33 UTC

Really interesting! I'll be following this one with great anticipation.

catsfiction August 2 2008, 13:09:43 UTC

Thank you. From a writer of your standing that is praise indeed.

firstarrival August 1 2008, 17:03:23 UTC

I love you. Seriously. Doctor Who and MCR. Perfect. *Wipes tear from eye* Actually, the funny thing is I was listening to I'm Not Okay while reading this...haha....although I thought that The Doctor might be more of a The Ghost Of You kind of guy......sorry....I love MCR... =D

Brilliant and am SO looking forward to more!

catsfiction August 2 2008, 13:09:04 UTC

Thank you. Not OK suddenly came up on my iPod and I just went with it, but I'm sure there are many other emo anthems that would do equally well.

treblebeth August 1 2008, 17:58:07 UTC

This is so so great. I love Ten II stealing a bit of the TARDIS because of the Donna in him. "Revenge by stolen staplers.” I can't wait for more!

catsfiction August 2 2008, 13:08:09 UTC

That, I must confess, wasn't my own idea, but I really love it.

wendymr August 1 2008, 20:53:58 UTC

You're writing again! I'm so pleased :)))

And this, like all of your work in the last year, is so ingenious. Brilliantly imaginative (using tMoS!), so in character, and definitely designed to give the Doctor a kick where he most needs it. This made me laugh:

“Don’t I get a hello?” Jack came forward, opening his arms for a hug. The Doctor stood still, resisting the bait.

“Or at least a ‘WHAAT’?” Jack continued, plaintively.

But the rest... oh, Rose! And the Duplicate Doctor! They don't deserve that, and I hope you can find a way to fix him and Donna both. Jack's right: if the Doctor had only asked, he had both Jack and the other him there to help with a solution for Donna, and he should have sat down with Rose and the duplicate Doctor to sort them out as well. But, no, as ever he makes decisions for everyone.

I'm really looking forward to more of this!

catsfiction August 2 2008, 13:07:46 UTC

You're right, they don't deserve it and I'll be doing something about that. Quite what, I'm not quite sure!

dark_aegis August 1 2008, 23:21:05 UTC

Oh, this is brilliant. I do so love how to turn things on their ear and examine the deeper issues of these characters. Especially of the Doctor. And poor Rose and Ten 2.0! I do hope that there'll be a way to fix Donna and Ten 2.0 and I look forward to your next installment!

catsfiction August 2 2008, 13:06:56 UTC

Glad you're liking it so far. Lots of deeper issues to go into, of course.