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The Best Laid Plans (4/6) : Doctor, Duplicate Doctor, Rose, Donna, Jackie, Tony

Nov 29, 2008 17:15

AUTHOR:

CREDITS: To the amazing A.E. Roberts for his invaluable website, The TARDIS Type 40 Manual, which makes the writing of convincing technobabble so much easier!sensiblecat

WORDS: 4455

ILLUSTRATION:

SPOILERS: Post Journey's End

CHARACTERS: Tenth Doctor, Duplicate, Rose, Donna

RATING- PG/Teen

DISCLAIMER: Based on characters and situations created by the BBC. ( Read more... )

the best-laid plans

Comments 12

togetheragain21 November 30 2008, 13:58:06 UTC

Does this mean Donna and the blue suited Doctor are on their way back to Earth?

After all thats happened I hope the Brown suited Doctor is still planning on leaving Rose behind with the other Doctor.
Besides I think too much has happned now for the blue suited Doctor and Rose to be happy together in this.

catsfiction November 30 2008, 20:25:52 UTC

Does this mean Donna and the blue suited Doctor are on their way back to Earth?

Yep. But which Earth?

pncwho November 30 2008, 16:44:57 UTC

"I went out with a bloke like you once," she told him. "The kind who thinks he knows everything about women. Went off to write TV shows. They're all like that there.

LOL! A little swipe at S.M., perchance? ;)

Great story so far! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

catsfiction November 30 2008, 20:26:37 UTC

LOL! A little swipe at S.M., perchance? ;)

If the cap fits...

dark_aegis December 1 2008, 01:43:46 UTC

Hmm. Why is it that I don't think things are as easy as they appear? Where and when are they? I seriously doubt it's the alt-verse Earth and the Tyler residence.

I did enjoy how the Doctor was starting to relax around Rose, and how he actually ended up saying the words. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

catsfiction December 2 2008, 21:00:10 UTC

Things are rarely as easy as they appear - in my stories, anyway.

I did rather enjoy writing the quiet scene of him working alongside her. I could picture it very clearly in my mind.

azalaisdep December 2 2008, 16:52:39 UTC

I love your Donna, she's spot on. "Tardis Magical Mystery Tours at your service, how may I help you?"

Snort. I do miss Donna.

catsfiction December 2 2008, 21:01:02 UTC

Yes, I could certainly see (and hear) Donna doing that very clearly.

np_complete December 6 2008, 01:43:07 UTC

Oh! Liked this so much. Liked the quiet, tender time between Rose and the Doctor, in the garden and then in the workshop. I hope what he's learning and realizing here will stick with him once the TARDIS is returned (if that is, in fact, Pete's Earth in front of them ( ... )

catsfiction December 8 2008, 13:41:54 UTC

What a lovely review. I do like writing about the Doctor having to stand still a while. And I'm pleased that the two Doctors are coming over as slightly different, because I think they are.