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Fic: Pros and Cons

Jul 20, 2008 17:43

Title: The Good Things in life, are often too hard to see
Author: Catslove17
Fandom: 1 Litre of Tears
Pairing: Aya/Haruto
Genre: Angst, sadness, melancholy, reflection
Rating: PG - unless death creeps you out or something.
Word Count: 1,140, I think, don't quote me on it
Disclaimer: Property of Johnny and Stardust.
Summary: Aya is encouraged by her ( Read more... )

char: haruto, 1 litre of tears, char: aya, pair: aya/haruto, fanfiction

Comments 2

joechenglover July 20 2008, 09:14:38 UTC

words.words cannot describe.♥♥♥

The world had seemed small in comparison, trembling before her.
metaphor.kdjlkdfjs ;__;

looking it up in the library and finding it available, an uncontainable smile spreading upon her face, jumping up and down with glee
idk.this line was so vivid and striking that i just could imagine that scene and the library and idek.i am embarassing myself with my rambling.:|

It was impossible she knew, to ever be that child running around screaming "you're it!".
blah.
blah me.;__;
i love your attention to detail and how you can turn the littlest scene into a stunning emotional portrait and D:<.because you win.

She loved him enough to suffice for the both of them.
gorgeous and simplistic and so very true.
aya always did love haruto too much,you could see it in her eyes.

If anyone could make her forget everything and anything, including how to breathe, it would be Haruto.i love love love this line and it was perfect for your lj-cut and ksjfsdlk lovers who can make each other stop breathing are the best kind. ( ... )

Only you can make me feel this way catslove17 July 20 2008, 10:08:42 UTC

I am so damn glad you commented. Your comments always send a tingly feeling down my spine, and give me such a huge confidence boost. I often go back and re-read my fics after reading your comment. Call me self centred ..... but you make me feel that way.

I am smiling so much, like you don't even know. Thank you so much for reading, so damn much. Words can not describe. I wanted to make the ending brilliant, and I always knew what it would look like. but it doesn't seem too right, however you always end up putting me at ease.

What in the world, would I do without you?