Short story 3: Rough Draft, First Battle Soldier

[cattich]

We all stood there breathless, I remember the energy in us all as we saw the legendary general for the first time, the entire army gathered around an overturned wagon provided for this reason. He would not allow any other platfoem be made simply for his first address to us

Comments

Powerful & Engaging

[misscollier]

Your writing not only tells an interesting story but also is like a kaleidoscope into your mind. Multifaceted. Great read!

Re: Powerful & Engaging

[cattich]

Thank you so much for your encouraging words! I've written a little more, if you would like me to post those!

I don't really know what to say, I'm so happy you enjoyed it I'm floored!

Blessings to You

[misscollier]

Keep writing and sharing. You never know who's watching and how your words speak into the hearts of others. One Love!