FIC - Nightmare,[NC-17], L/K, 3/3.

[cattm]

She has been painting. Concentric circles in bright, primary colors. Vibrating, pulsating, hypnotizing circles, consuming her. The only way to break free is to hurl buckets of paint all over the wall. She does. From where did she get all that paint? It slides down the wall, and she is giddy with relief. She is spattered with paint, as is he. He is

Comments

[callmeonetrack]

Whoo! This was amazing. So hot. You did an incredible job of maintaining the tension from the first two parts and really ratcheting it up a notch in this one.

The hint of Leoben!dream added to the dazed, slightly wrong atmosphere too. So good!

Hope you post it to SASA!

[cattm]

Thank you so much! :)

I'm so glad that you think I maganged to get the atmosphere dazed and slightly wrong, because that's exactly what I was aiming for!

I'm also happy that you think I managed to keep the tension up, because it was really hard to get the right balance.

[elzed]

Nice buildup, hot conclusion... and you did keep that dreamy, sleepy atmosphere going, too. Ah, for a little more of that in the show, sigh...

[cattm]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, and that you think I managed with the atmosphere. I wouldn't mind more of it on the show either... Not so hopeful that we will, though. But that's where fanfic comes in handy, right?

[joss80]

Wow! I thoroughly enjoyed this fic... particularly the descriptions you go into around emotions. It's incredibly vivid :)

[cattm]

Thank you so much! :)

[sunrider05]

Great ending and very good writing - thank you!

[cattm]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[arielmoondance]

Well done! Thanks for sharing this!

[cattm]

Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it.