The Hands

[catu2111]

Title: The Hands
Author: catu2111
Fandom: White Collar
Characters/Pairings: Neal C., Peter B. No Pairings.
Rating: T
Word Count: 1650
Spoilers: None
Beta Credit: no betaed
Warnings: Angst, vomiting, whump
Summary: In the darkness and silence all he can feel is fear and pain, but Neal knows there's someone keeping him safe.

Disclaimer: White Collar

Comments

[embroiderama]

Oh wow, this is great! The sensory details are really sharp and your English is fine. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.

[catu2111]

I work with animals, they live in a world of sensations so I thought that for a first try, I should do it from a perspective I know better. Thanks for the compliment, it means a lot, specially coming from you, I love your fics.

[daria234]

This is very lovely, and the way you ended with just a name is perfect.

[catu2111]

Thanks. Second chapter is now Peter POV, so it ends pretty much the same way :)

[sapphire2309]

This is beautiful :)

[catu2111]

Thanks. I'm enjoying writing it

[hawk_soaring]

This is beautiful. Eager for the next chapter.

[lov_pb]

Mesmerizing. You've captured your audience.

[catu2111]

I suppose that is the best thing you can say to a writer ;)