The Hands: Ch2

[catu2111]

Chapter 2: Deafening roar and blinding light

"I'll go to take a look back"

Peter opened his mouth to protest, but finally didn't say anything. He wanted to remind Neal that if something came to happen he was not armed, but to be honest he did not expect anything to happen either. They were interviewing a witness to a case of insurance, not in a

Comments

[marcelasue]

Wow, this is so good. The way you're telling the story from Neal's side and now from Peter's... I'm loving this. Wanna keep reading :D

[hawk_soaring]

I love your descriptions of the emotions of these two men. Eager for more.

[nywcgirl]

Great story, especially the POV from both Neal and Peter. please continue the story.

[catu2111]

Thanks to everyone!

I'll continue the story, don't be afraid, but this is a rough week, so I doubt I will be able to advance much. Hopefully next next Monday, the later, I'll post a new chapter.

We all have our mortgage fraud cases taking our time from the fun cases

[lov_pb]

Intense. Both men are experiencing a terrifying ordeal.
Will be looking forward to the next update.

[catu2111]

Thanks!
It's a challenge on itself to keep the same level on future chapter, since I'm afraid I'll have to be more technical in and less... raw.