NCIS fic: Takin' a Crazy Chance, DiNozzo/McGee, PG-13

Oct 04, 2009 21:48

The title of this fic is from Secret Lovers by Atlantic Starr. I totally blame
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2009: fanfic, probilicious, tv: ncis

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schtroumph_c October 4 2009, 20:58:36 UTC
I'm feeling so guilty I'm going to read it before going to sleep. It'll be hard, but I'll pay for my crime.

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catwalksalone October 5 2009, 15:09:39 UTC
I could be sorry for keeping you up past your bedtime, but I'm not. :D

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Ah! It's actually too big for one comment. schtroumph_c October 5 2009, 21:53:47 UTC
You're an evilly evil thing. Just for that, I'll copy and past a lot.

Okay, let's try an actual review, with words, instead of mental manipu...Forget the last part.

Tony frowns, zips his lips and does an exaggerated tiptoe over to Tim's side.

I totally can see MW improvises that.

he whispers low and close to McGee's ear.

For the sake of discretion, obviously.

McGee simply taps at his ear again. Okay, DiNozzo, shut up and listen.

My love for Abby and Ziva is so huge!

It does not matter what else is happening, their first instinct is always to turn to the other.

Like Tony in 7x01 at "Let's go home."

it's obvious to Tony that whoever they're discussing she's totally on board and would probably like to watch.

Who wouldn't? She probably watched security video every time they were alone in a room just in case.

And Tony's so handsy with him. I mean, I know he's all about the touching anyway, but with Timmy? Wow. That's not at all subtle for someone who's supposed to be good at undercover.

He does, he does, he totally does!

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Party two! schtroumph_c October 5 2009, 21:55:13 UTC
Every time Gibbs is out of the squad room (because they're not crazy)

Well duh.

Ziva's short, it takes extra energy to look down

*snort*

Tony stands behind him, craning over his shoulder so close he can almost feel McGee's stubble growing (though, to be fair, he'd have to stand in one place for at least three years before it was substantial enough to pierce Tony's micro-thin personal bubble)

Oh yeah Tony, you only started to do that. Juuust for the plan.

Who knew fingers could be so loud?

You forget, I run faster than you. Last one to the car takes popgun."

A scuffle, jangling keys, a pained 'Ow!' from McGee and two pairs of rapidly retreating footsteps.

Ziva!! I love when they're such kids.

it's weird, he never used to bruise so easily. Maybe he's getting old.

Yeah, maybe.

if assistance means staring at the ass on display, disappearing behind the other's desk to 'help out' and emerging with mussed hair and a glazed expression.

Must be so hard work for them.

(and now is not the time to think about the tragic and ( ... )

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celli October 4 2009, 21:17:48 UTC
Oh, my God. This might actually be my favorite Tim/Tony story ever. *I* started getting all fluttery at the first kiss. Oh, God.

*glomps you*

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catwalksalone October 5 2009, 15:10:23 UTC
EEEEEE! YAY, thank you! *does a happy dance* *recipro-glomps*

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etcetera_cat October 4 2009, 21:25:11 UTC
:D :D :D --> this was me, the whole way through this. Further coherence is not currently available, and won't be until my glee runs out. In about a decade's time.

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catwalksalone October 5 2009, 15:11:30 UTC
*beams at you* Supplier of glee, I think I like that. :DDD

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soupytwist October 4 2009, 21:34:11 UTC
as firsts come and go (mostly come) = LOLOLOLOLOL

Also, TIMMY IS A SOOTHING PRESENCE.

Also also, aww.

*loves*

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catwalksalone October 5 2009, 15:13:48 UTC
I think S7 McGee particularly would be a soothing presence. I reckon he'd be AWESOME at taking care of you when you were sick, all solid and calm and helpful and SOOTHING. *draws hearts around him* *and also around you*

(One day Tony will not go straight to making-jokes-about-the-multiple-meanings-of-'come'. Today is not that day.)

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klo_the_hobbit October 4 2009, 21:36:28 UTC
Oh they are ridiculous. Its awesome.

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catwalksalone October 5 2009, 15:14:32 UTC
Right? SO ridiculous. *hearts* Glad you liked it!

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