Comments | catwalksalone: NCIS fic: Wrong Move, Right Time, DiNozzo/McGee, PG

catwalksalone

NCIS fic: Wrong Move, Right Time, DiNozzo/McGee, PG

Oct 10, 2009 15:58

This may well be the post-ep fic that you are looking for, in that it's post-ep and also fic. Other than that, ymmv.

Post-703 (The Inside Man), 2700 words, PG, enthusiastic thumbs up from

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2009: fanfic, probilicious, tv: ncis

Comments 59

sam80853 October 11 2009, 02:26:26 UTC

::smiles::::

This is adorable!

Awesome Tony!voice!

catwalksalone October 11 2009, 09:05:12 UTC

Thank you! *beams*

booxradley October 11 2009, 03:54:22 UTC

lojgridfkljgpdfo;l I absolutely loved this, omg ♥

catwalksalone October 11 2009, 09:05:52 UTC

Thank you! I'm delighted you enjoyed it.

kasumidance October 11 2009, 10:21:32 UTC

WHY DO I ALWAYS FIND OUT YOU HAVE NEW FIC AT SOME UNGODLY HOUR WHEN I SHOULD'VE BEEN IN BED LONG AGO.

"Which only means one thing. As far as you're concerned we're just casual dating and-" he tips back his head and laughs maniacally, -"how come I'm the one that has to say this? Did I grow breasts when I wasn't looking? Must be all the hormones they're pumping into the cows these days. Why don't you want to be with me, McGee?" He emphasizes the rhyme as if to minimize the plaintive tone of the question.

I just. I. I almost cried. I literally had my hands over my mouth and I was hurting because Tony was obviously in so much pain and trying to be all blase to cover the fact that he was hurt so deeply by Tim's non-admissal (is this even a word? You know what I mean, right? I blame the fact that it's 3 in the morning and I've been drinking).

And then, "Ziva," he says as if that explains everything, and when Tony does nothing more than stare at him adds, "I've seen how you look at each other, like there's no one else in the room. I heard ( ... )

catwalksalone October 11 2009, 12:45:09 UTC

I DO IT ON PURPOSE BECAUSE I AM ALL ABOUT THE SLEEP-DEPRIVATION.

Or, you know, not.

And yay, thank you! It's just, Tony thinks it should be OBVIOUS how much he loves Tim and that it doesn't need spelling out in words of one syllable and Tim, whether he likes it or not, is always going to be the high school kid who never got anything to work out for him the way he wanted to so learned not to hope and NEEDS things spelling out in words of one syllable. Oh, boys. *smooshes them*

I-I-I. I don't know whether to laugh or cry at this.

Excellent. Job done. :D

soupytwist October 11 2009, 18:10:12 UTC

I am entirely sober, thankyou, and I still LOVE LOVE LOVE this. Oh, it's gorgeous.

(In fact the one thing I question is how Tony managed to be lucky enough to only take a month to move house!)

catwalksalone October 11 2009, 18:51:36 UTC

And I LOVE LOVE LOVE you, so that's good then, isn't it? HI! ILU.

(No chain! Also he didn't MOVE in a month, just started the buying process. So there. ;P )

samueljames October 11 2009, 19:44:49 UTC

I felt so sorry for Tony here. Glad they sorted things out.

catwalksalone October 12 2009, 15:21:21 UTC

*pets Tony* He's glad they sorted it out, too! Thanks for reading. :D