Hello everybody out there in LiveJournal land. I need a beta. Any volunteers?

[catwallada]

The fic is going to be in two parts. The first part is a Noelian with Julia watching. As she's in it there will be a smidge of het if that bothers anyone. Also its not as angsty as it might sound but I don't want to say too much. Part two will be the Julian/Florence Welch/ Noel in a dress threesome that I promised to write a while back. Both parts

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[concupiscence66]

I'm available!

[catwallada]

You'd be happy to beta a story I'm writing as a present for you?

[concupiscence66]

Why not? It's like I can command my own porn.

This is how I imagine the beta process.

"I think this scene lacks tension. Perhaps instead of bending Noel over a chair, Julian should spank him first."

"I got confused with the pronouns right here, whose penis is in whose mouth?"

"It would make more sense for the character if Florence would smack Noel's ass and call him a tart earlier in the scene rather than later."

"It would help unpack Julian's feelings in this scene if he licked Noel's balls."

See? I am the logical choice! And yet, based on this post, I would understand if you went with someone who was sane as your beta rather than moi.

Now you've mentioned spanking I can't breathe

[catwallada]

*Takes deep breath*
I guess it does make sense. You can help me when I'm a bit stuck or loose all faith in my writing ability. If you want you can also be my smut consultant.