Omg, - she tries to write naughtily

[causeidontdare]

Title: Swim with me, Ace!
Characters: Sanji and Ace and a tad of Luffy and Chopper.
Rating: High because of explicit sexually related material. Still, there is no fucking.
Summary: Ace is Bathing, - and Sanji does various things to him, using the water to keep him immobilised. Ace/Sanji. Bdsm themed, vaguely noncon.

Comments

wow

[kaze_tsukai]

First off, cookies for writting Ace/Sanji :D more cookies for doing it so well! Wooo... that was nice. Brought my evening to a very pleasant close.

Good job! I loved the flow of words, and just the speech between the two. It's poetic and just made me sit and repeat the words to myself in awe. Awesome story ^-^

Re: wow

[causeidontdare]

*giggles* thanks alot!

[bumpgrrl]

wow - tense and intense - i was worried for a couple of seconds there - poor ace.... but not really... i guess?

yeah, shivers down my spine - good on the creepy, good on the hot.

do my words make sense? o well.

thanks for reminding me that zoro and sanji are not actually a couple, and that there are plenty of other great pairings around.

[causeidontdare]

I was getting worried too, - that noone would ever read my fic. But now you are two persons, so yay. Poor ace? I guess, - it turned out a bit amiguous as I haven't ever tried to write something like this before.

But, - thanks for reading.

[bumpgrrl]

well, poor ace in the sense that it was vaguely noncon (a very predatory sanji!) and he was crying - but not poor ace in the sense that it was rather enjoyable (and not just for him, but for us too!).

[joseethefirst]

What a wonderful use of water!

[causeidontdare]

tihi, - that's what I thought too.

[causeidontdare]

uhh, - that meant thanks...

[joseethefirst]

XD! No problem!

[chef_of_love]

*points*

He burned Sanji-kun's hair!!

*looks at the Ace...*

Um... given the circumstances... I forgive him... as long as it grows back. ^__~

[causeidontdare]

heh, - that was my one and only attempt at teh hardcore :P

[pan_pingli]

Gaw, I'm such a ragin newbie. If that doesn't completely trump my opinion, then allow me to say that this is a really great fic. Very hot!

[causeidontdare]

you think?

*Squees*

Thanks!