Comments | causeidontdare: Closer pt1

causeidontdare

Closer pt1

Nov 12, 2005 13:04

Characters: Ace and Sanji, Nakama are mentioned, but not involved ( Read more... )

Comments 27

errantimpulses November 12 2005, 17:24:52 UTC

aw, very nice! continue it, continuuuuuuuuuuuue! Is that encouraging enough? :-D

causeidontdare November 12 2005, 21:02:28 UTC

it helped alot actually. Cause I'm always so afraid of not getting any comments, and so the first one always makes one feel a bit better.

thanks

Nice ^^ kaze_tsukai November 12 2005, 18:53:19 UTC

That was sweet. I loved the description of Ace falling asleep in his food. You kept all of them in character, so I congratulate you :D

Can't wait for the next chapter!! ^-^

Re: Nice ^^ causeidontdare November 12 2005, 21:03:18 UTC

hey. the only one who had acesan on their interest list. Nice to see you here :D

and thanks!

Re: Nice ^^ kaze_tsukai November 12 2005, 21:15:14 UTC

are you serious? That's horrible! o.o'

and your welcome ^-^

Re: Nice ^^ causeidontdare November 12 2005, 21:20:49 UTC

yup. That's why I was surprised that so many people joined this community..

Thread 6

anonymous November 13 2005, 00:55:32 UTC

Heheh...just uses the swordsman's junk without his permission...oh wait. o.o XD

shymagical November 13 2005, 00:56:14 UTC

Heheh...just uses the swordsman's junk without his permission...oh wait. o.o XD

causeidontdare November 13 2005, 01:32:38 UTC

umm... he's not too likely to notice, is he?

shymagical November 13 2005, 01:57:19 UTC

"Heheh...using Zoro's stuff without his permission...wait...XD!"

"umm... he's not too likely to notice, is he?"

Ahahahahahahaa! >XD

causeidontdare November 13 2005, 09:52:07 UTC

*looks around*

what?

Thread 7

mango_32 November 24 2005, 00:24:53 UTC

Wah~ I wanna know what'll happen next...please continue?

I liked how Ace and Sanji interact.And with the ZoSan hinted.(^_____^*grins*)
But it's not like Ace to be so...um...sad? Hope he gets what he wants eventually.XD

causeidontdare November 24 2005, 01:27:08 UTC

yay. A comment *grins*

He's not that sad. More like cold and sleepless... I know that I tend to add a thick coat of melancholy to everything that I write, and I am trying to avoid it, but it happens all the time. Too bad when it affects my ability to write in character. And it's not like Ace to be sleepless either I guess...

I will finish part two during next week. I am a bit busy right now.