college essay--let me know what you think

[cbay18]

Prompt: you are a novelist writing a novel. use one of the following to begin with. I chose "As I turned the corner, I saw the person that saved my life 10 years ago." Tell me what's good/bad, etc

Comments

[haleshasanlj]

I like it very much! I wouldn't say "NOT!" in the great excuse bit, it loses its touch there. Good work! =)